Nov. 14, 2021
One day, my friend Mike invited to his house his friend Tom to watch TV. During watching TV they decided something to eat but when Mike opened the fridge there were nothing food there.
Tom proposed to call me and invited me to join them and at the same time I would buy pizza which they could decide a problem their hungry.
Mike has done how I advised him and in about fifteen minutes I was standing near the Mike's house door.
I didn't have much times sitting on a visit, for this reason I lad left Mik's before we have eaten whole pizza.
One day, my friend Mike invited to his house his friend Tom to his house to watch TV.
DuringWhile watching TV they decided to eat something to eat but when Mike opened the fridge there were nothing food there.
Tom proposed tosaid they should call me and invited me to join them and at the same time I would buy pizza which they could decide a problem their hungryeat.
Mike hasd done howas I advised him and in about fifteen minutes I was standing near the Mike's housefront door.
I didn't have much times sitting on aand visiting, for this reason I lhad left Mike's before we haved eaten the whole pizza.
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Is his name Mike or Mik? big difference in English pronunciation. I corrected everything to Mike since you said Mike first.
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One day, my friend Mike invited me to his house with his friend Tom to watch TV.
DuringWhilst watching TV they decided to get something to eat but when Mike opened the fridge there were nothingas no food therinside.
Tom proposed to called me and invited me to join them, and aton the same time I would buy pizza which they could decide a problem their hungryway I was to buy some pizza. This would solve their problem.
Mike has done how I advised himI did as Mike asked me and in about fifteen minutes I was standing near athe Mike's housefront door.
I am not sure how if this is really what you meant!
I didn't havespend much times sitting on a visit, for this reason I lad left Mik's there, and I left before we haved eaten the whole pizza.
alternatively:
I didn't spend much time there, and I I left before the pizza was finished.
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I hope this is a true story - nice of you to go buying pizza for a friend!
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One day, my friend Mike invited to his house his friend Tom to watch TV. One day, my friend Mike invited me to his house with his friend Tom to watch TV. One day, my friend Mike invited |
During watching TV they decided something to eat but when Mike opened the fridge there were nothing food there.
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Tom proposed to call me and invited me to join them and at the same time I would buy pizza which they could decide a problem their hungry. Tom Tom |
Mike has done how I advised him and in about fifteen minutes I was standing near the Mike's house door.
I am not sure how if this is really what you meant! Mike ha |
I didn't have much times sitting on a visit, for this reason I lad left Mik's before we have eaten whole pizza. I didn't alternatively: I didn't spend much time there, and I I left before the pizza was finished. I didn't have much time |
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