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April 22, 2021

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Write to the hotel introducing yourself

Dear Mr. Smith

I am writing to express my interest in the position of hotel manager.
I am currently working as a hotel supervisor for a big hotel chain, and I would like to acquire more knowledge about the hotel industry.
I have a Bachelor’s degree in Hospitality from the ULC University, and I am currently working at ABC Hotel.
I am responsible for assisting the general manager, controlling inventory, inspecting rooms, and managing a group of 200 employees.
I understand the intricacies of running a hotel, so every day I make sure that not only the guests, but my employees have everything they need to create and enjoy great memories.
As you can see from my CV, I have been working as a hotel supervisor for five years, and during the course of five years I have gained experience in both administrative and client services.
I hope to gain more insight into the financial and operational areas.
I feel I am suitable for this role as I am a conscientious, efficient, and enthusiastic worker.
I wonder if I could ask a few questions. Is advanced German required?
Is training offered to all employees?
Thank you for your time. I am available for an interview at any time that is convenient for you.
Please, find my CV attached.

Sincerely,

xxxxxx

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Dear Mr. Smith,

I have a Bachelor’s degree in Hospitality from the ULC University, and nowadays, I amam currently working forat ABC Hotel.

I am responsible for assisting the general manager, controlling inventory, inspecting rooms, and managing a group of 200 employees.

I understand the intricacies of running a hotel, andso every day I make sure that not only the guests, but also my employees have everything that isey needed to create and enjoy great momentemories.

As you can see from my CV, I have been working as a hotel supervisor for five years, and during the course of five years, I have gained experience in both administrative and client services.

I hope to gain more insight into the financial and operational areas.

I feel I am suitable for this role as I am a conscientious, efficient, and enthusiastic worker.

I wonder if I could askalso have a few questions.

Is it offered training offered to all new employees?

Is it required the ability to speak German at the advanced leveladvanced German required?

Thank you for your time. I am available to dofor an interview at any time that is convenient for you.

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jolishe

April 23, 2021

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Thank you for the feedback! :)

Write to the hotel introducing yourself

Dear Mr. Smith

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to express my interest in the position of hotel manager.

I am currently working as a hotel supervisor for a big hotel chain, and I would like to acquire more knowledge about the hotel industry.

I have a Bachelor’s degree in Hospitality from the ULC University, and nowadays, I am working for ABC Hotel.

I have a Bachelor’s degree in Hospitality from the ULC University, and nowadays, I amam currently working forat ABC Hotel.

I am responsible for assisting the general manager, controlling inventory, inspecting rooms, and managing a group of 200 employees.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I understand the intricacies of running a hotel, and every day I make sure that not only the guests but also my employees have everything that is needed to create and enjoy great moments.

I understand the intricacies of running a hotel, andso every day I make sure that not only the guests, but also my employees have everything that isey needed to create and enjoy great momentemories.

As you can see from my CV I have been working as a hotel supervisor for five years, and during the course of five years, I have gained experience in both administrative and client services.

As you can see from my CV, I have been working as a hotel supervisor for five years, and during the course of five years, I have gained experience in both administrative and client services.

I hope to gain more insight into the financial and operational areas.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I feel I am suitable for this role as I am a conscientious, efficient, and enthusiastic worker.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wonder if I could ask a few questions.

I wonder if I could askalso have a few questions.

Is it offered training to all new employees?

Is it offered training offered to all new employees?

Is it required the ability to speak German at the advanced level?

Is it required the ability to speak German at the advanced leveladvanced German required?

I am available to do an interview at any time.

Thank you for your time. I am available to dofor an interview at any time that is convenient for you.

Please, find my CV attached.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

xxxxxx

I have a Bachelor’s degree in Hospitality from the ULC University, and I am currently working at ABC Hotel.

I understand the intricacies of running a hotel, so every day I make sure that not only the guests, but my employees have everything they need to create and enjoy great memories.

Is advanced German required?

Is training offered to all employees?

As you can see from my CV, I have been working as a hotel supervisor for five years, and during the course of five years I have gained experience in both administrative and client services.

Thank you for your time.

I am available for an interview at any time that is convenient for you.

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