Write the story shown in the pictures.

Jack wand Tom played tennis outside. Two hours later,It's it raining,ed so Jack use thed an umbrella with Tom. The rain iwas very hard.T so they caouldn't play tennis. They decided to go home. They are playing a tennis game ion the computer now.

Jack wand Tom play tennis outside. Two hours later,I it's raining,. Jack uses the umbrella with Tom. The rain is very hard. They can't play tennis. They decide to go home. They are playing a tennis game ion the computer now.

Alternative: Jack and Tom are playing tennis outside. Two hours later, it begins to rain. Jack shares his umbrella with Tom. The rain is pouring (very hard). They can't play tennis anymore, so they decide to go home. Now, they're playing a tennis game on the computer.

Jack wand Tom play tennis outside. Two hours later, It's raining, Jack uses the umbrella with Tom. The rain is very hard. They can't play tennis. They decide go home. They are playing a tennis game ion the computer now.

This is good! Well done!
After punctuation there needs to be a space, other than that very good!