Sept. 27, 2022
Write something about my life
Hey this is my daily writing for sharing my life and improvng english learning. This passage is for Aunt. chen. She is a cleaner in the UG hall 1 which I live on in hkust. There are a amazing meet between us.
One day I got into common room and wash my plates. She came to say hi to me and we have a conversation. I was just complianting hongkong's price is so expensive and she bring a lot of meat to me after that day. She said:" Zhou, you are from Anhui, people's living standard is not as good as hongkong. Don't feel stressful because I can't eat them all, they are too many to me. " I feel very greatful and immideatly came back to dormitory taking the fruit back to her, but she said:" no need, I just cannot eat these food."
Oh Aunt.chen, eventhough I am very young, I am not a stupid. I know these meat are your kind, not the full you cannot eat. You are like my family. Treat me so well.
As a poor student from mainland China, I only can stay here for only one semester as an exchange student. I hope one day I can come back as a stronger person to make you pround of me.
Yes, I am materially poor，but I am spirtiually rich because I have you around me and support me. Your love is silent and requited. I also have strong mindset. I will come back one day and show you how better I am being. You told me I should get the hk ID card because it is very hard to get and has a lot of befenits. It is like god or fortune send you to my life. I am appreicated I met you in hk.
She came to say hi to me and we haved a conversation.
I was just complianting haining that Hongk Kong's price is so expensive and she bringought a lot of meat to me after that day.
She said:" "Zhou, you are from Anhui, people's living standard there is not as good as hin Hongk Kong."
"Don't feel stressful because I can't eat them all, they are too many toembarrassed. I can't eat it all. It's too much for me. "
I feel very greateful and immideediately camewent back to dormitory taking thmy room to take some fruit back to her, but she said:" n, "No need, I just cannot eat theseis much food."
Oh Aunt.c Chen, even though I am very young, I am not a stupid.
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I know theseis meat areis your kind, being kind. It's not the fullat you cannot eat it.
TYou treat me so well.
As a poor student from mainland China, I only can stay here for only one semester as an exchange student.
I hope one day I can come back as a stronger person to make you pround of me.
Yes, I am materially poor，, but I am spirtitually rich because I have you around me andto support me.
Your love is silent and requited.
I also have a strong mindset.
Mindset is not appropriate in this sentence
I will come back one day and show you how much better I am beinggot.
You told me I should get the hkan HK ID card because it is very hard to get and has a lot of befennefits.
It is like god or fortune sendt you into my life.
I am appreicateglad I met you in hkHK.
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That's a wonderful story. It's great to know there people in the world like Aunt Chen.
Sept. 28, 2022
Yess, Thank you for editing!
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Write something about my life |
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Hey this is my daily writing for sharing my life and improvng english learning. |
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This passage is for Aunt. |
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chen. |
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She is a cleaner in the UG hall 1 which I live on in hkust. |
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There are a amazing meet between us. |
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One day I got into common room and wash my plates. |
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She came to say hi to me and we have a conversation. She came to say hi to me and we ha |
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I was just complianting hongkong's price is so expensive and she bring a lot of meat to me after that day. I was just compl |
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She said:" Zhou, you are from Anhui, people's living standard is not as good as hongkong. She said: |
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Don't feel stressful because I can't eat them all, they are too many to me. " "Don't feel |
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I feel very greatful and immideatly came back to dormitory taking the fruit back to her, but she said:" no need, I just cannot eat these food. I feel very gr |
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Oh Aunt.chen, eventhough I am very young, I am not a stupid. Oh Aunt Stupid is an adjective. |
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I know these meat are your kind, not the full you cannot eat. I know th |
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You are like my family. |
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Treat me so well.
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As a poor student from mainland China, I only can stay here for only one semester as an exchange student. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I hope one day I can come back as a stronger person to make you pround of me. I hope one day I can come back as a stronger person to make you prou |
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Yes, I am materially poor，but I am spirtiually rich because I have you around me and support me. Yes, I am materially poor |
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Your love is silent and requited. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I also have strong mindset. I also have a strong mind Mindset is not appropriate in this sentence |
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I will come back one day and show you how better I am being. I will come back one day and show you how much better I |
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You told me I should get the hk ID card because it is very hard to get and has a lot of befenits. You told me I should get |
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It is like god or fortune send you to my life. It is like god or fortune sen |
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I am appreicated I met you in hk. I am |
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