Aug. 28, 2022
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Yesterday I woke up at 7 am, and I felt really, really tired. I don't know exactly why, but this week I've been unable to fall asleep without spending hours rolling on the bed thinking about why I can't sleep. Anyway, as soon as I got up I went to see my cute puppy that was in the living room. We went out for a walk and when we came back my mom had just finished making breakfast. Then at noon I went to the house of Mónica, one of my closest friends, and we watched movies until the evening, it was really fun! Then I came back home, I read a chapter from The Picture of Dorian Grey (such a wonderful novel so far!), had dinner and I went to bed.
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Write about your day!
Yesterday I woke up at 7 am, and I felt really, really tired.
I don't know exactly why, but this week I've been unable to fall asleep without spending hours rolling on the bed thinking about why I can't sleep.
Anyway, as soon as I got up I went to see my cute puppy that was in the living room.
We went out for a walk and when we came back my mom had just finished making breakfast.
Then at noon I went to the house of Mónica, one of my closest friends, and we watched movies until the evening, i. It was really fun!
Then I came back home, and I read a chapter from The Picture of Dorian Grey. It's been (such a wonderful novel so far! ),Lastly I had dinner and I went to bed.
Your sentence makes sense but the grammar is a little informal. My suggestion makes it more formal.
Please correct!
Thank you!
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Write about your day!
Yesterday I woke up at 7 am, and I felt really, really tired.
I don't know why exactly why, but this week I've been unable to fall asleep without spending hours rolling onall over the bed thinking about why I can't sleep.
Anyway, as soon as I got up I went to see my cute puppy that waswho I found in the living room.
We went out for a walk and when we came back my mom had just finished making breakfast.
Then at noon I went to the house of Mónica, one of my closest friends, and we watched movies until the evening, it was really fun!
Then I came back home, I read a chapter from The Picture of Dorian Grey (such a wonderful novel so far! ), had dinner and then I went to bed.
Please correct me!
Thank you!
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Don’t be afraid to write a review on the book you’re reading and upload !!!! I have read a bit myself, would love to know what you think of it!
Your English is fantastic, I just edited for more natural sounding phrases. Well done!
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Then I came back home, I read a chapter from The Picture of Dorian Grey (such a wonderful novel so far! ), had dinner and I went to bed. Then I came back home, I read a chapter from The Picture of Dorian Grey (such a wonderful novel so far! ), had dinner and then I went to bed. Then I came back home Your sentence makes sense but the grammar is a little informal. My suggestion makes it more formal. |
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