Dec. 9, 2024
One of my hobbies is photography. I like watching normal life and taking pictures of it. I have a dream that I can come to many places to see and take photos. I am living near an airport so I can take some photos and post them on my Facebook. I want to see the sunrise and take photos to share with my family and friends. But there is no sea here and I don't have enough money to travel somewhere to have the sea. I don't have a professional camera but the camera on my phone I'm using can take beautiful scenery. Because of my dream, I always go to many places in my city and have many experiences. I know many places that have some good food with wonderful scenes and are suitable for my money. If you want to visit my city, I will show you around different places. Don't forget your camera to take many photos to share with your friends and I hope you can introduce my city through your stunning pictures
I like watching normalobserving everyday life and taking pictures of it.
I have a dream that I can comego to many places to see and take photos.
or "visit many places"
I am livinglive near an airport, so I can take some photos and post them on my Facebook.
But there is no sea here, and I don't have enough money to travel somewhere to haveby the sea.
I don't have a professional camera, but the camera on mythe phone I'm using can take beautiful scenery.
"the" because you already say "I'm using"
Because of my dream, I always go to many places in my city and have many experiences.
a little vague
I know many places that have some good food with wonderful scenes and are suitable for my moneybudget.
Don't forget your camera to take many photos to share with your friends and. I hope you can introduceshow off my city through your stunning pictures.
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overall very understandable, some of the details are a bit redundant (i.e. repeated)
One of my hobbies is photography.
I have a dream that I can comeo go to many places to see them and take photos.
I am living near an airport, so I can take some photos and post them on my Facebook.
I want to see the sunrise and take photos to share with my family and friends.
But there is no sea here and I don't have enough money to travel somewhere to havsee the sea.
I don't have a professional camera but the camera I'm using on my phone I'm using can takecan take pictures of beautiful scenery.
Moving the “I’m using” to behind “on my phone” sounds more natural
Because of my dream, I always go to many places in my city and have many experiences.
If you want to visit my city, I will show you around different places.
Don't forget your camera to take many photos to share with your friends and I hope you can be introduced to my city through your stunning pictures
I have a dream that I can comego to many places to see and take photos.
But there is not a sea here and I don't have enough money to travel somewhere to have thehat has a sea.
I don't have a professional camera but the camera on my phone I'm using can take beautiful scenery photos.
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Because of my dream, I always go to many places in my city and have many experiences. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Because of my dream, I always go to many places in my city and have many experiences. a little vague |
I know many places that have some good food with wonderful scenes and are suitable for my money. I know many places that have some good food with wonderful scenes and are suitable for my |
If you want to visit my city, I will show you around different places. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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