Dec. 4, 2024
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I have had a few interesting experiences in my life. Last year, I went on vacation to Da Nang with my friends. I tried to catch fish on the beach and went diving to explore the natural beauty of the area. I was fascinated while diving because I could see even more beautiful places beneath the water. I have also surfed in the ocean and gone paragliding. I saw fantastic views from the top of the stairs, surrounded by mountains. I ate many kinds of seafood while I was there. Have you ever drunk wine or beer and stayed here? Yes, I have tried it, and I felt very excited because I could share many stories from my life with my friends and feel less stressed. I hope I can visit again.
I have had a few interesting experiences in my life.
Last year, I went on vacation to Da Nang with my friends.
I tried to catch fish on the beach and went diving to explore the natural beauty of the area.
I was fascinated while diving, because I could see even more beautiful places beneath the water.
You need a comma between the two independent clauses. Note that the sentence about trying to catch a fish and diving was correct without a comma. That is because the part of the sentence after "and" is just the other piece of the predicate. Even native speakers have trouble with commas.
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I have had a few interesting experiences in my life.
Last year, I went on vacation to Da Nang with my friends.
I tried to catch fish on the beach and went diving to explore the natural beauty of the area.
I was fascinated while diving because I could see even more beautiful places beneath the water.
I have also surfed in the ocean and gone paragliding.
Since you talking about a specific event in time you don't need to use "have". If you're talking about things that you did in the past habitually (often or more than once) then you'd use "I have also".
I saw fantastic views from the top of the stairs, surrounded by mountains.
I ate many kinds of seafood while I was there.
Have you ever druank wine or beer and stayed here?
Yes, I have tried it, and I felt very excited because I could share many stories from my life with my friends and feel less stressed.¶
You can use contractions to sound a bit more natural/native. For instance "I have" would become "I've".
I hope I can visit again.
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Yes, I have tried it, and I felt very excited because I could share many stories from my life with my friends and feel less stressed. Yes, I You can use contractions to sound a bit more natural/native. For instance "I have" would become "I've". |
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Last year, I went on vacation to Da Nang with my friends. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I tried to catch fish on the beach and went diving to explore the natural beauty of the area. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was fascinated while diving because I could see even more beautiful places beneath the water. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I was fascinated while diving, because I could see even more beautiful places beneath the water. You need a comma between the two independent clauses. Note that the sentence about trying to catch a fish and diving was correct without a comma. That is because the part of the sentence after "and" is just the other piece of the predicate. Even native speakers have trouble with commas. |
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I have also surfed in the ocean and gone paragliding. I Since you talking about a specific event in time you don't need to use "have". If you're talking about things that you did in the past habitually (often or more than once) then you'd use "I have also". |
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