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Write a letter to my friend who went to study at London

Dear friend,

It was a long a long time. I hope you are fine. Since you went to London, we didn't talk together.
So i want to know all about your new life. What's about London, it is a beautifull town? And people, are they nice with strangers ?
About your school, do you like it? have you new friends? what are their names? Teachers give lessons comprehensibly?
And food, do you like London's foods? Do you do any exercices? If yes, Which ?
About me, i am very fine. Since you went, i go to Paris University to do Mathematics. I began well and i like this module.
I meet many peoples here who are my friends now. We pass much time together. We play soccer and basketball together.

I wait your response, in a short time.
Take care of you

Your friend Milou


Cher ami,

Cela fait très longtemps. J'espère que tu vas bien. Depuis ton départ pour Londres, nous n'avons pas eu de nouvelles.

J'aimerais donc tout savoir de ta nouvelle vie. Comment est Londres ? Est-ce une belle ville ? Et les gens, sont-ils accueillants avec les étrangers ?

Et ton école ? Tu l'aimes bien ? T'es-tu fait de nouveaux amis ? Comment s'appellent-ils ? Les cours sont-ils clairs ?

Et la nourriture ? Aimes-tu la cuisine londonienne ? Fais-tu des exercices ? Si oui, lesquels ?

Pour ma part, je vais très bien. Depuis ton départ, je suis à l'université de Paris pour étudier les mathématiques. J'ai bien commencé et j'aime beaucoup cette matière.

J'ai rencontré plein de gens ici qui sont devenus mes amis. On passe beaucoup de temps ensemble. On joue au foot et au basket.

J'attends ta réponse très bientôt.

Prends soin de toi.

Ton ami, Milou

Corrections

Write aA letter to my friend who went to study at London

The correction above is just a description of what you're writing, but if you want to make the title a command, you should say "write a letter to your friend who went to study at London". If you say "my friend" it sounds like you're telling yourself to write the letter.

Dear friend,

It whas abeen long a, long time.

I hope you are fine.

Since you went to London, we didn't talk haven't spoken (together).

So i, I want to know all about your new life.

What's about London, it isLondon like? Is it a beautifull town?

I think it's more technically correct to write these as two separate questions, although in more casual contexts, like when texting, a comma would probably be fine. Also, I think generally people would refer to London as a city - towns are usually not that large.

And the people, are they nice withto strangers ?

Just saying "people" sounds like you're talking about all people abstractly, whereas "the people" makes it clear that you're talking specifically about the people in London.

AWhat about your school, d? Do you like it?

Do you have you new friends?

wWhat are their names?

TDo the teachers give lessons comprehensibly?

The correction above is grammatically correct but sounds very weird. A more natural way to say this is probably "do the teachers teach well?" or even just "are the teachers good?"

And the food, do you like London's foods?

The difference between "food" and "the food" is the same as the point above about "people" and "the people". Although "London's foods" is an understandable phrase, a more natural way to say it is "and the food, do you like it there?"

Do you do any exercicese?

If yes, Which so, what?

Abouts for me, iI am very fine.

Since you went, i goleft, I have been going to Paris University to do Mmathematics.

Using "have been..." shows that something began in the past but continues into the present, so is quite useful in the context of a letter. So, for example:

"I go to Paris University" - you go there now but this gives no indication of when you started going.
"I went to Paris University" - this sounds like you no longer go now.
"I have been going to Paris University" - you started going in the past, but you still go there now.

You can use this with basically any verb. For example:

"Recently, I have been playing a lot of football" - I started in the past ("recently") but I still play football now.
"Since then, you have been swimming a lot" - after some point ("then"), you started swimming and you still swim now.
"He has been eating a lot of chocolate" - he started at some point in the past and still eats a lot of chocolate generally now.

I began well and iI like this modulcourse.

"Module" usually refers to a smaller part of something I think. For example, in a university course you may take lots of modules or classes.

I have meet many peoples here who are my friends now.

We pass much time together.

"We spend much time together" might sound a bit more natural.

We play soccer and basketball together.

I waitill wait for your response, in a short time.

Take care of yourself.

Or just "take care".

Your friend Milou

Feedback

Your writing was quite easy to understand, and the contents of the letter seemed very thoughtful.

Write a letter to my friend who went to study at London


Write aA letter to my friend who went to study at London

The correction above is just a description of what you're writing, but if you want to make the title a command, you should say "write a letter to your friend who went to study at London". If you say "my friend" it sounds like you're telling yourself to write the letter.

Dear friend,


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was a long a long time.


It whas abeen long a, long time.

I hope you are fine.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Since you went to London, we didn't talk together.


Since you went to London, we didn't talk haven't spoken (together).

So i want to know all about your new life.


So i, I want to know all about your new life.

What's about London, it is a beautifull town?


What's about London, it isLondon like? Is it a beautifull town?

I think it's more technically correct to write these as two separate questions, although in more casual contexts, like when texting, a comma would probably be fine. Also, I think generally people would refer to London as a city - towns are usually not that large.

And people, are they nice with strangers ?


And the people, are they nice withto strangers ?

Just saying "people" sounds like you're talking about all people abstractly, whereas "the people" makes it clear that you're talking specifically about the people in London.

About your school, do you like it?


AWhat about your school, d? Do you like it?

have you new friends?


Do you have you new friends?

what are their names?


wWhat are their names?

Teachers give lessons comprehensibly?


TDo the teachers give lessons comprehensibly?

The correction above is grammatically correct but sounds very weird. A more natural way to say this is probably "do the teachers teach well?" or even just "are the teachers good?"

And food, do you like London's foods?


And the food, do you like London's foods?

The difference between "food" and "the food" is the same as the point above about "people" and "the people". Although "London's foods" is an understandable phrase, a more natural way to say it is "and the food, do you like it there?"

Do you do any exercices?


Do you do any exercicese?

If yes, Which ?


If yes, Which so, what?

About me, i am very fine.


Abouts for me, iI am very fine.

Since you went, i go to Paris University to do Mathematics.


Since you went, i goleft, I have been going to Paris University to do Mmathematics.

Using "have been..." shows that something began in the past but continues into the present, so is quite useful in the context of a letter. So, for example: "I go to Paris University" - you go there now but this gives no indication of when you started going. "I went to Paris University" - this sounds like you no longer go now. "I have been going to Paris University" - you started going in the past, but you still go there now. You can use this with basically any verb. For example: "Recently, I have been playing a lot of football" - I started in the past ("recently") but I still play football now. "Since then, you have been swimming a lot" - after some point ("then"), you started swimming and you still swim now. "He has been eating a lot of chocolate" - he started at some point in the past and still eats a lot of chocolate generally now.

I began well and i like this module.


I began well and iI like this modulcourse.

"Module" usually refers to a smaller part of something I think. For example, in a university course you may take lots of modules or classes.

I meet many peoples here who are my friends now.


I have meet many peoples here who are my friends now.

We pass much time together.


We pass much time together.

"We spend much time together" might sound a bit more natural.

We play soccer and basketball together.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wait your response, in a short time.


I waitill wait for your response, in a short time.

Take care of you


Take care of yourself.

Or just "take care".

Your friend Milou


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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