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How to introduce myself at work meetings
(I'm really interested in any suggestions that you could have for improving my introduction)
Hello, I'm Pascal. Thank you for having me.
I’ve been working as an Identity Manager in the company for more than two years now.
Our headquarters are in Suresnes, just next to Paris, but most of the time I work remotely.
I live about thirty kilometres south of Paris, so I’m not too far away.
The Identity team, which counts five engineers and myself, is responsible for two main activities.
On the one hand we manage the life cycle of the digital identities, which includes onboarding, offboarding and moving of users, but also access management
On the other hand we manage all the infrastructures related to identity management, like Active Directory, Entra ID, MFA, certificate management and so on.
Our digital identity population is composed of about twelve thousand users with their different account types, as well as several hundred technical accounts.
Digital identity management concerns all IT systems, so we work with many different teams, but more particularly with HR and those providing user services.
I look forward to working together.
(I'm really interested in any suggestions that you couldmight have for improving my introduction)
Hello, I'm Pascal.
Thank you for having me.
I’ve been working as an Identity Manager in the company for more than two years now.
Our headquarters are in Suresnes, just next to Paris, but most of the time I work remotely.
I live about thirty kilometres south of Paris, so I’m not too far away.
The Identity team, which counts five engineers and myselfcomprised of myself and five others, is responsible for two main activities.
On the one hand we manage the life cycle of the digital identities, which includes onboarding, offboarding and moving of users, but also access management
On the other hand we manage all the infrastructures related to identity management, like Active Directory, Entra ID, MFA, certificate management and so on.
Our digital identity population is composed of about twelve thousand users with their different account types, as well as several hundred technical accounts.
Digital identity management concerns all IT systems, so we work with many different teams, but more particularly with HR and those providing user services.
'more particularly' is redundant.
I look forward to working together.
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Well written!
"Thank you for having meinviting me to . . ." (whatever you are there to do).
"Having me" is an uninteresting statement to open with. Maybe you could experiment with tailoring what you say to the type of meeting or the people present.
The Identity team, which countincludes five engineers and myself, is responsible for two main activities.
"Counts" is incorrect. (I think you could use "comprises" instead of "includes" but I'm not sure.)
On the one hand we manage the life cycle of the digital identities, which includes onboarding, offboarding and moving of users, but also access management.
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Well done. It's quite clear, even for someone who knows little to nothing about your field.
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Hello, I'm Pascal. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Thank you for having me. "Thank you for "Having me" is an uninteresting statement to open with. Maybe you could experiment with tailoring what you say to the type of meeting or the people present. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I’ve been working as an Identity Manager in the company for more than two years now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Our headquarters are in Suresnes, just next to Paris, but most of the time I work remotely. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I live about thirty kilometres south of Paris, so I’m not too far away. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The Identity team, which counts five engineers and myself, is responsible for two main activities. The Identity team, which "Counts" is incorrect. (I think you could use "comprises" instead of "includes" but I'm not sure.) The Identity team, |
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On the one hand we manage the life cycle of the digital identities, which includes onboarding, offboarding and moving of users, but also access management On the one hand we manage the life cycle of the digital identities, which includes onboarding, offboarding and moving of users, but also access management. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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On the other hand we manage all the infrastructures related to identity management, like Active Directory, Entra ID, MFA, certificate management and so on. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Our digital identity population is composed of about twelve thousand users with their different account types, as well as several hundred technical accounts. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Digital identity management concerns all IT systems, so we work with many different teams, but more particularly with HR and those providing user services. Digital identity management concerns all IT systems, so we work with many different teams, but 'more particularly' is redundant. |
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I look forward to working together. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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