May 22, 2020
Three days ago, I did a terrible thing with my cat. I cut his mustache. When I did, I didn’t know that was a bad thing. Until today, I just realized how much terrible. My cat doesn’t look like before. Why I said my cat doesn’t look like before, because he was a fun cat, he was so active, he run and jumped all day. But now, he almost sleeps all day and he doesn’t eat anything. My sister said because I cut his mustache, I don’t believe it, so i searched on Google and I have to agree with my sister. That’s all my fault. Now I'm worried and regret.
Three days ago, I did a terrible thing withto my cat.
Three days ago, I did a terrible thing to my cat.
I cut off/shaved his mustache. I cut off/shaved his mustache.
When I did, it I didn’t know thait was a bad thing.
When I did it I didn’t know it was a bad thing.
Until today,. I just realized how much terrible it was to do that.
Until today. I just realized how terrible it was to do that.
Why I saidy my cat doesn’t look like before, because he wasused to be a fun cat, h. He was so active, h. He ruan and jumped all day.
I say my cat doesn’t look like before because he used to be a fun cat. He was so active. He ran and jumped all day.
But now, he almost sleepssleeps almost all day and he doesn’t eat anything.
But now, he sleeps almost all day and he doesn’t eat anything.
My sister said it's because I cut off/shaved his mustache,. I don’t believe it, so iI searched on Google and now I have to agree with my sister.
My sister said it's because I cut off/shaved his mustache. I don’t believe it, so I searched on Google and now I have to agree with my sister.
That’It's all my fault.
It's all my fault.
Now I'm worried and regretful. Now I'm worried and regretful.
Three days ago, I did a terrible thing withto my cat.
Three days ago, I did a terrible thing to my cat.
"With": You and your cat did something terrible together
"To": You did something terrible
When I did that, I didn’t know that was a bad thing. When I did that, I didn’t know that was a bad thing.
Until today, I just realized how much terrible.
Until today, I just realized how terrible.
My cat doesn’t look like before.
Why I saidy my cat doesn’t look like before, because before, he was a fun cat, he was so active, he ruan and jumped all day.
I say my cat doesn’t look like before, because before, he was a fun cat, he was so active, he ran and jumped all day.
But now, he almost sleepssleeps almost all day, and he doesn’t eat anything.
But now, he sleeps almost all day, and he doesn’t eat anything.
"Almost" is modifying "all day" not "sleeps," so it needs to be attached to that.
My sister said it was because I cut his mustache,. I don’idn't believe it, so i searchedI looked it up on Google and now I have to agree with my sister.
My sister said it was because I cut his mustache. I didn't believe it, so I looked it up on Google and now I have to agree with my sister.
You imply that you changed, so "now" (or something else to indicate that) is necessary.
That’s all my fault.
Now I'm worried and full of regret. Now I'm worried and full of regret.
Or: "Now I'm worried and regret it."
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I hope things turn out okay for you and your cat!
Also, I must note that "mustache" is acceptable if it's part of how you are trying to characterize what happened, but "whiskers" may be more appropriate.
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Three days ago, I did a terrible thing with my cat.
Three days ago, I did a terrible thing
Three days ago, I did a terrible thing "With": You and your cat did something terrible together "To": You did something terrible |
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I cut his mustache. I cut off/shaved his mustache. I cut off/shaved his mustache. |
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When I did, I didn’t know that was a bad thing.
When I did When I did that, I didn’t know that was a bad thing. When I did that, I didn’t know that was a bad thing. |
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Until today, I just realized how much terrible.
Until today
Until today, I just realized how |
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My cat doesn’t look like before. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Why I said my cat doesn’t look like before, because he was a fun cat, he was so active, he run and jumped all day.
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But now, he almost sleeps all day and he doesn’t eat anything.
But now, he
But now, he "Almost" is modifying "all day" not "sleeps," so it needs to be attached to that. |
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My sister said because I cut his mustache, I don’t believe it, so i searched on Google and I have to agree with my sister.
My sister said it's because I cut off/shaved his mustache
My sister said it was because I cut his mustache You imply that you changed, so "now" (or something else to indicate that) is necessary. |
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That’s all my fault.
This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now I;m worried and regret. |
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Now I'm worried and regret. Now I'm worried and regretful. Now I'm worried and regretful. Now I'm worried and full of regret. Now I'm worried and full of regret. Or: "Now I'm worried and regret it." |
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