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Helloy man, Hhow are you doing? dark, I need to share my day with us, eyou. Everyday, I'm wake up early, because my withfe wakes up early too, every single day, she and me do this we do this every day. Hey man, how are you doing? I need to share my day with you. Everyday, I wake up early, because my wife wakes up early too, we do this every day.

"She and I" isn't necessary.

Hello man,! How are you doing dark, I need? I want to share my day with us, eyou. Every day, I'm wake up early, because my with wakes up early too, e. Every single day, she and meI do this. Hello man! How are you doing ? I want to share my day with you. Every day, I wake up early because my with wakes up early too. Every single day, she and I do this.

Hello man, How are you doing dark,? I need to share my day with us, e. Everyday I'm wake up early, because my with wake up early too, every single day, she and meI do this. Hello man, How are you doing dark? I need to share my day with us. Everyday I wake up early, because my with wake up early too, every single day, she and I do this.

Hello man, Hhow are you doing dark,? I need to share my day with us, everyday I'm wake up early, because my withI wake up early too, every single day, she and meI do this. Hello man, how are you doing dark? I need to share my day with us, everyday I wake up early, because I wake up early too, every single day, she and I do this.

Change me to I, adjust some words. Not sure what you mean by 'how are you doing dark'

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Today I discorvedvered that my refridgerator was broke,n. I don't know what happened to it. Today I discovered that my refrigerator was broken. I don't know what happened to it.

"fridge broke" is ok, but it is more idiomatic to say "my fridge was broken."

Today I discorvedred that my fridge broke,. I don't know what happened to it. Today I discovered that my fridge broke. I don't know what happened to it.

Today I discorvedred that my fridge broke, I don't know what happened to it. Today I discovered that my fridge broke, I don't know what happened to it.

change to 'that', change the spelling of 'discovered'

Today I discorvered my fridge is broken, I don't know what happened to it. Today I discovered my fridge is broken, I don't know what happened to it.

i simply I discorvedred it, then today was the second day that I driank waters morn warm, it's terrible. i simply discovered it, then today was the second day that I drank water warm, it's terrible.

I simply I discorved, thenvered it like that. Also, today was the second day that I had to drink waters morn, it'srm water-- it is terrible. I simply discovered it like that. Also, today was the second day that I had to drink warm water-- it is terrible.

"Discovered" is a transitive verb and has to have an object. You could say "found it like that" as well.

simply I discorved, then tI just discovered it. Today was the second day that I driank warm waters morn, it' - it was terrible. I just discovered it. Today was the second day I drank warm water - it was terrible.

simply, I discorvered, then today was the second day that I drink waters in the morning, it's terrible. simply, I discovered, then today was the second day that I drink water in the morning, it's terrible.

Add comma. Morn into morning, maybe you meant 'in the morning'

simply I discorved, then I realized it because today was the second day that I drink waters morn, it'sthe water tasted terrible. I realized it because today was the second day that the water tasted terrible.

Now I' am at jobwork and latter I go to home, it'that is my day Now I am at work and later I go to home, that is my day

Now I'm at jobwork, and latter I'll go to home, it's. That is my day. Now I'm at work, and later I'll go to home. That is my day.

Now I'm at jobwork, and latter I'll go to home, i. That's my day. Now I'm at work, and later I'll go home. That's my day.

Now I'm at my job and latter I go to home, it's my day Now I'm at my job and later I go home, it's my day

remove 'to' in 'later I go to home', as it's unnecessary. You need to say that you are going to your job. "I am going to my job' vs. "I am going to his job" English needs this clarification

Now I'm at my job, and latter I go to home, it's my daywill go home. This is my daily schedule. Now I'm at my job, and later I will go home. This is my daily schedule.