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Sept. 1, 2021

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Would you rather live in a large city or in the countryside?

Some people think that living in a large city has many advantages, others prefer to live in a countryside far away of big city. To me, I definitely believe that living in a city is better than in a countryside.

First of all, living in a city has some advantages, for instance, the transportation. Normally big cities have a very good public transportations where the citizens can use them and take many different destinations inside of the city. Before, I lived in a big city and usually took the subway what was extremely convenient, although the distance was very far, but I could reach my final destination only in fifteen or twenty minutes, instead of using bus that spent thirty or even forty minutes with traffic. Different in the countryside where the public transportation is not convenient and undeveloped.

Moreover, a large city has many different kind of restaurants. I mean, you can enjoy unlike taste, for example, Chinese, Italian, Indian, Japanese, Korean, Mexican, Thai, among others. For me, this point is so important because I am a lover food. I am so proud of my food (Ecuadorian) because the taste is unique, but I am open to taste international food. In the past, I had the opportunity to visit big cities such as Taipei, Seoul, Bangkok, and tasted many food that were enrichment experiences. Then, this opportunity to eat not only the local food but also international food is very important in my life. Different situation if you live in the countryside. Probably you can get some local food, yet it is so hard to find an international restaurant.

Finally, big cities can offer many places that you can hang out with your friends. For example, museums, historical places, famous monuments, etc. I remember when I was living in Taiwan, I could visit with my friends the famous skyscraper, Taipei 101. I could learn many things about this building, because the engineers and architectures designed the building using the ‘Feng Shui’ ideology, where different parts of the building have a symbolic representation, which was so interesting to me.

To sum up, living in a big city offers many wonderful opportunities to do, whereas these things are very difficult to find in the countryside.

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Would you rather live in a large city or in the countryside?

Some people think that living in a large city has many advantages, while others prefer to live in athe countryside far away ofrom the big city.

To me, I definitely believe that living in a city is better than in aliving in the countryside.

Always "the countryside" (never "a countryside").

First of all, living in a city has some advantages, for instance, themakes it easier to access transportation.

Normally big cities have a very good public transportations where the citizens can use them and take that allows citizens to reach many different destinations inside of the city.

Before, I lived in a big city and usually took the subway, whatich was extremely convenient, although the distance was very far, but. However, I could reach my final destination in only in fifteen or twenty minutes, instead of using bus that spentthe bus, which took thirty or even forty minutes with traffic.

DifferentIn contrast, in the countryside where the, public transportation is not convenient and undeveloped.

Moreover, a large city has many different kinds of restaurants.

I mean, you can enjoy unlike taste, for example,a variety of cuisines, including Chinese, Italian, Indian, Japanese, Korean, Mexican, Thai, among others.

For me, this point is so important because I am a lover of food.

Or you could say "because I am a real foodie."

I am so proud of my food (Ecuadorian) because the taste is unique, but I am open to tasterying international food.

In the past, I have had the opportunity to visit big cities such as Taipei, Seoul, and Bangkok, andwhere I tasted many food that were enrichment experiencdelicious dishes.

"Enrichment experience" isn't a standard phrase and sounds a bit odd here.

Then, this opportunity to eat not only the local food but also international food is very important in my life.

DIt's a different situation if you live in the countryside.

Probably you canYou can probably get some local food, yet it is so hard to find an international restaurant.

Finally, big cities can offer many places thatwhere you can hang out with your friends, such as museums, historical places, famous monuments, etc.

For example, museums, historical places, famous monuments, etc.

This is not a complete sentence, so I combined it with the previous one.

I remember when I was living in Taiwan, I could visit with my friends the famous skyscraper, Taipei 101 with my friends.

I could learn many things about this building, because the engineers and architectures designed the building using the ‘Feng Shui’ ideology, where different parts of the building have a symbolic representation, which was so interesting to me.

To sum up, living in a big city offers many wonderful opportunities to doand activities, whereas these things are very difficult to find in the countryside.

You don't "do" an opportunity - I added "and activities" to make it sound a bit more natural.

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david1

Sept. 9, 2021

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I appreciate your feedback.

Would you rather live in a large city or in the countryside?


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Some people think that living in a large city has many advantages, others prefer to live in a countryside far away of big city.


Some people think that living in a large city has many advantages, while others prefer to live in athe countryside far away ofrom the big city.

To me, I definitely believe that living in a city is better than in a countryside.


To me, I definitely believe that living in a city is better than in aliving in the countryside.

Always "the countryside" (never "a countryside").

First of all, living in a city has some advantages, for instance, the transportation.


First of all, living in a city has some advantages, for instance, themakes it easier to access transportation.

Normally big cities have a very good public transportations where the citizens can use them and take many different destinations inside of the city.


Normally big cities have a very good public transportations where the citizens can use them and take that allows citizens to reach many different destinations inside of the city.

Before, I lived in a big city and usually took the subway what was extremely convenient, although the distance was very far, but I could reach my final destination only in fifteen or twenty minutes, instead of using bus that spent thirty or even forty minutes with traffic.


Before, I lived in a big city and usually took the subway, whatich was extremely convenient, although the distance was very far, but. However, I could reach my final destination in only in fifteen or twenty minutes, instead of using bus that spentthe bus, which took thirty or even forty minutes with traffic.

Different in the countryside where the public transportation is not convenient and undeveloped.


DifferentIn contrast, in the countryside where the, public transportation is not convenient and undeveloped.

Moreover, a large city has many different kind of restaurants.


Moreover, a large city has many different kinds of restaurants.

I mean, you can enjoy unlike taste, for example, Chinese, Italian, Indian, Japanese, Korean, Mexican, Thai, among others.


I mean, you can enjoy unlike taste, for example,a variety of cuisines, including Chinese, Italian, Indian, Japanese, Korean, Mexican, Thai, among others.

For me, this point is so important because I am a lover food.


For me, this point is so important because I am a lover of food.

Or you could say "because I am a real foodie."

I am so proud of my food (Ecuadorian) because the taste is unique, but I am open to taste international food.


I am so proud of my food (Ecuadorian) because the taste is unique, but I am open to tasterying international food.

In the past, I had the opportunity to visit big cities such as Taipei, Seoul, Bangkok, and tasted many food that were enrichment experiences.


In the past, I have had the opportunity to visit big cities such as Taipei, Seoul, and Bangkok, andwhere I tasted many food that were enrichment experiencdelicious dishes.

"Enrichment experience" isn't a standard phrase and sounds a bit odd here.

Then, this opportunity to eat not only the local food but also international food is very important in my life.


Then, this opportunity to eat not only the local food but also international food is very important in my life.

Different situation if you live in the countryside.


DIt's a different situation if you live in the countryside.

Probably you can get some local food, yet it is so hard to find an international restaurant.


Probably you canYou can probably get some local food, yet it is so hard to find an international restaurant.

Finally, big cities can offer many places that you can hang out with your friends.


Finally, big cities can offer many places thatwhere you can hang out with your friends, such as museums, historical places, famous monuments, etc.

For example, museums, historical places, famous monuments, etc.


For example, museums, historical places, famous monuments, etc.

This is not a complete sentence, so I combined it with the previous one.

I remember when I was living in Taiwan, I could visit with my friends the famous skyscraper, Taipei 101.


I remember when I was living in Taiwan, I could visit with my friends the famous skyscraper, Taipei 101 with my friends.

I could learn many things about this building, because the engineers and architectures designed the building using the ‘Feng Shui’ ideology, where different parts of the building have a symbolic representation, which was so interesting to me.


I could learn many things about this building, because the engineers and architectures designed the building using the ‘Feng Shui’ ideology, where different parts of the building have a symbolic representation, which was so interesting to me.

To sum up, living in a big city offers many wonderful opportunities to do, whereas these things are very difficult to find in the countryside.


To sum up, living in a big city offers many wonderful opportunities to doand activities, whereas these things are very difficult to find in the countryside.

You don't "do" an opportunity - I added "and activities" to make it sound a bit more natural.

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