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TOMO_o

Aug. 31, 2025

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Would you rather go to the past or the future?

I would like to go to the future, because I can see past things in a museum but future things are not exist at the moment. I want to experience a hologram particularly like in the STAR WARS. I'm interested in fashion and food in the future too.

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Would you rather go to the past or the future?

This is perfectly fine. You could also say ".... or to the future?"

I would like to go to the future, because so I can see past things in a museum but future things are not exist at the moment.from the past in a museum and things from the future that do not yet exist.

I want to experience a hologram particularly like in the STAR WARS.

I'm also interested in future fashions and food in the future toos.

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Fun!!!! Hope we have a great future to look forward to! What new foods will be invented? What foods will no longer be available?

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TOMO_o

Sept. 1, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
There are many difficult things, such as the order of adverbs and whether or not to use "the."

I would like to go to the future, because I can see pasthistorical things in a museum but future things aredo not exist at the moment.

I particularly want to experience a hologram particularly like in the STAR WARS.like in Star Wars

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TOMO_o

Sept. 1, 2025

9

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
There are many difficult things, such as the order of adverbs and whether or not to use "the."

Would you rather go to the past or the future?

I would like to go to the future, because I can see past things in a museum, but future things are nodon't exist at the moment.

You don't need a comma before the word, because. However, you need a comma before the word, but. Here's a resource: https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/punctuation/commas/index.html

I want to experience a hologram particularly like in the STAR WARSlike in Star Wars.

I'm interested in fashion and food in the future too.

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Great job!

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TOMO_o

Sept. 1, 2025

9

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
There are many difficult things, such as the order of adverbs and whether or not to use "the."

Would you rather go to the past or the future?


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Would you rather go to the past or the future?

This is perfectly fine. You could also say ".... or to the future?"

I would like to go to the future, because I can see past things in a museum but future things are not exist at the moment.


I would like to go to the future, because I can see past things in a museum, but future things are nodon't exist at the moment.

You don't need a comma before the word, because. However, you need a comma before the word, but. Here's a resource: https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/punctuation/commas/index.html

I would like to go to the future, because I can see pasthistorical things in a museum but future things aredo not exist at the moment.

I would like to go to the future, because so I can see past things in a museum but future things are not exist at the moment.from the past in a museum and things from the future that do not yet exist.

I want to experience a hologram particularly like in the STAR WARS.


I want to experience a hologram particularly like in the STAR WARSlike in Star Wars.

I particularly want to experience a hologram particularly like in the STAR WARS.like in Star Wars

I want to experience a hologram particularly like in the STAR WARS.

I'm interested in fashion and food in the future too.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm also interested in future fashions and food in the future toos.

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