yesterday
Would you like to be a doctor?
I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at that time. I am31-year old now and I have a lot to do on my work and private, so I think it’s too late to try again. Our aim to the future has been changed as we grow up.
I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at (that time / the time).
"the time" reads a little more natural here I think, but "that time" is fine too.
I am (31- years old / 31) now and I have a lot to do on my work and private life, so I think it’s too late to try again.
You can say "years old" like the 歳 in 31歳 but in English it's often omitted entirely.
Option 1: "Our aim tos for the future chas beennge as we grow up."¶
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Option 2: "My goals for the future changed as weI groew up."
Option 1 is making a statement about how things change for people in general.
Option 2 is making a statement about your life.
yesterday
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I'm still not sure which particle to choose, like "on" or "at."
I guess it comes down to the number of words and getting used to the pronunciation.
Next time I'll try writing the sentences while pronouncing them.
I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at thate time.
I am 31- years old now and I have a lot to do on myat work and privatin my personal life, so I think it’s too late to try again.
Our aim tos for the future has been changed as we grow up.
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I think it's still possible to change careers, as long as you have money.
yesterday
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I'm still not sure which particle to choose, like "on" or "at."
I guess it comes down to the number of words and getting used to the pronunciation.
Next time I'll try writing the sentences while pronouncing them.
I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at that time.
Maybe you, or the adults in your life, didn't think you were smart enough?
Are you stating a fact or a perception?
I am 31- years old now, and I have a lot to do onfor my work and in my private life, so I think it’s too late to try agat this point.
"again" means that you tried before. You could repeat "now," but to avoid using it twice in this sentence, "at this point" (which is a little less formal than "at this time") works well.
Our aim togoals for the future has been changed as we grow up.
This is a general statement, so it should be written in the present tense.
yesterday
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I'm still not sure which particle to choose, like "on" or "at."
I guess it comes down to the number of words and getting used to the pronunciation.
Next time I'll try writing the sentences while pronouncing them.
yesterday
Pronouncing the sentences while writing them is a good idea. Often we can hear if something sounds right or wrong.
You can also try typing your sentence into Google search and asking if it is correct.
Someone mentioned she uses Grammerly. Here is an example: https://www.grammarly.com/blog/parts-of-speech/prep-in-on-at/
Would you like to be a doctor?
I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at that time.
I am31-year old'm 31 now and I have a lot to do oin my work and in my private live, so I think it’s too late to try again.
Our aim togoals for the future has been changeds as we grow up.
yesterday
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I'm still not sure which particle to choose, like "on" or "at."
I guess it comes down to the number of words and getting used to the pronunciation.
Next time I'll try writing the sentences while pronouncing them.
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I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at that time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at that time. Maybe you, or the adults in your life, didn't think you were smart enough? Are you stating a fact or a perception? I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at th I used to want to be a doctor, but I wasn’t smart enough at (that time / the time). "the time" reads a little more natural here I think, but "that time" is fine too. |
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I am31-year old now and I have a lot to do on my work and private, so I think it’s too late to try again. I I am 31 "again" means that you tried before. You could repeat "now," but to avoid using it twice in this sentence, "at this point" (which is a little less formal than "at this time") works well. I am 31 I am (31 You can say "years old" like the 歳 in 31歳 but in English it's often omitted entirely. |
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Our aim to the future has been changed as we grow up. Our Our This is a general statement, so it should be written in the present tense. Our aim Option 1: "Our aim Option 1 is making a statement about how things change for people in general. Option 2 is making a statement about your life. |
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