May 12, 2022
Would you date someone if you knew they were cheating?
Would you date someone if you knew they were cheating on a significant other, (they told you from the beginning and never lied about it)?
I won‘t. I won’t date a girl who cannot think and do things in unison. She cheats on people who are around her today and she will cheat on me who is her boyfriend tomorrow. Nobody wants to get together with a person who will hurt them.
I guess you ask the question because the guy is very attractive that you want to get with him. I wish you can cherish yourself because there are many people who are attractive and honest in the world. Don’t just look at the present. Try having more broad horizon to the future. You will encounter the one that you will want to get with him forever.
I hope my suggestion can help you. Have a lovely day!
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Would you date someone if you knew they were cheating on a significant other, (even if they told you from the beginning and never lied about it)?
Opening a parenthesis straight after a comma is incorrect, either remove the brackets or the comma.
I wouldn‘t.
As this is a hypothetical situation, best to keep the conditional tense.
I wouldn’t date a girl who cannoouldn't think and do things in unison.
She would cheats on people who are around her today and she willould cheat on me who isif I were her boyfriend tomorrow.
Nobody wants to get together withdate a person who will hurt them.
I guess you ask the question because the guy is very attractive that you want to get with him.is very attractive.
I wish you canould cherish yourself because there are many people who are attractive and honest in the world.
It is a speculation on what might happen, and so conditional tense is appropriate here too.
Don’t just look at the present.
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'get with' is often used more casually. 'To be with' implies a long-term relationship.
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Great effort! Just a few grammatical issues that could be worked on. Overall, a great piece with an interesting topic and varied vocabulary.
May 13, 2022
Thank you for editing and encouraging.
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Would you date someone if you knew they were cheating? |
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Would you date someone if you knew they were cheating on a significant other, (they told you from the beginning and never lied about it)? Would you date someone if you knew they were cheating on a significant other, Opening a parenthesis straight after a comma is incorrect, either remove the brackets or the comma. |
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I won‘t. I wouldn‘t. As this is a hypothetical situation, best to keep the conditional tense. |
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I won’t date a girl who cannot think and do things in unison. I wouldn’t date a girl who c |
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She cheats on people who are around her today and she will cheat on me who is her boyfriend tomorrow. She would cheat |
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Nobody wants to get together with a person who will hurt them. Nobody wants to |
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I guess you ask the question because the guy is very attractive that you want to get with him. I guess you ask the question because the guy |
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I wish you can cherish yourself because there are many people who are attractive and honest in the world. I wish you c It is a speculation on what might happen, and so conditional tense is appropriate here too. |
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Don’t just look at the present. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Try having more broad horizon to the future. Try to hav |
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You will encounter the one that you will want to get with him forever. You will encounter the one that you will want to You will 'get with' is often used more casually. 'To be with' implies a long-term relationship. |
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I hope my suggestion can help you. |
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Have a lovely day! |
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