April 3, 2024
would anyone mind answer my question?
The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in 2016.
I want to paraphrase the phrase "the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA received." Can I use the word "revenue or income"?
according to what i read, income is the money that a company makes from its activities, after taking away some costs. so, i cannot use income here, is that correct? can you recommend me some other ways to paraphrase it?
wWould anyone mind answering my questions?
The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in 2016.
I want to pararephrase the phraseit to, "the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA received."
Can I use the word "revenue or income"?
You can say revenue.
aAccording to what iI read, income is the money that a company makes from its activities, after taking away some costs.
so, iI cannot use income here, is that correct?
Yep.
cCan you recommend me some other ways to paraphrase it?
You can say "The amount of revenue generated by a charity for children located in the USA.".
wWould anyone mind answering my question?
The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located COMMENT: Can you indicate the URL of the pie chart? Without seeing the USA spent and received in 2016.chart, I cannot correct it well.
I want to paraphrase the phrase, "the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA received."
NOTE: You probably need to specify *what year(s)* they received that money.
Can IANSWER: Often (but not always) you can use the word "revenue" or "income."?
according to wWhat iI read, an "income" is the money that a company makes from its activities, after taking awaydeducting some costs.
NOTE: Individuals can also earn income - not only companies.
so, i cannot use income here, is that correct?ANSWER: I do not have information to answer your question. Many NGOs and NPOs report their *incomes* annually. (Their income comes from donations.)
April 4, 2024
https://zim.vn/giai-de-ielts-writing-task-1-va-task-2-band-7-de-thi-ngay-25112021. here is the link to the pie chart. Thank you so much.
wWould anyone mind answer my question?
The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in 2016.
I want to paraphrase the phrase "the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA received."
Can I use the word "revenue" or "income"?
aAccording to what iI read, income is the money that a company makes from its activities, after taking away some costs.
I think you've mixed income up with profit. Profit has expenses removed, income doesn't.
so, iSo I cannot use income here, is that correct?
cCan you recommend me some other ways to paraphrase it?
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"Revenue" or "Earnings" would both work fine for your chart. "Profit" is generally the money left over after expenses. "Income" can also work and doesn't generally exclude expenses, but in a business setting "Revenue" is generally used. This equation for might help:
Revenue - expenses = profit or loss.
It's a profit if revenue is greater than expenses, and a loss is expenses are greater.
April 4, 2024
thank you so much.
can you recommend me some other ways to paraphrase it?
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i think income/revenue are probably wrong for a charity - its typical to say that charities _raise money_ - so "the amount of money raised and spent" etc
April 4, 2024
thank you so much.
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Can I use the word "revenue or income"? Can I use the word "revenue" or "income"?
Can I use the word "revenue or income"? You can say revenue. |
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according to what i read, income is the money that a company makes from its activities, after taking away some costs.
I think you've mixed income up with profit. Profit has expenses removed, income doesn't.
NOTE: Individuals can also earn income - not only companies.
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so, i cannot use income here, is that correct?
so, Yep. |
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can you recommend me some other ways to paraphrase it? can you recommend
You can say "The amount of revenue generated by a charity for children located in the USA.". |
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