Dec. 21, 2020
Working lunch
Today I’m going to have a really important meeting. On my job, important meetings are done in a formal lunch (which for me is fantastic: I love restaurants and good food). Let’s say that eating people understand each other better and are more willing to close deals. Well, let’s go to the point: today I’m going to lunch with my best client and, at the same time, my less profitable one. Those two concepts sound opposite but they are true. I have a little consultancy firm and we have two ways to classify our clients: by his potential and by his profitability. On this case I see a lot of potential, but we are spending to much time in projects that don’t give us profit.
¿What’s the problem you may ask? The problem is that our client workers are the less efficient people in the world. Usually we sell knowledge, but in this case, we sell knowledge, time, and tons of patience.
¿And why is so important? Because I need to learn to say “Not”, and there’s not best moment to learn than when you are under pressure.
Working lunch
Today I’m going to have a really important meeting.
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I think you're trying to say, the client is the least profitable of all of your clients. If it's not the least possible, you could say 'a less profitable one'
Those two concepts sound opposite but they are true.
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OIn this case, I see a lot of potential, but we are spending too much time ion projects that don’t givebring us profits.
¿What’s the problem you may ask?
The problem is that our client worker's employees are the lessast efficient people in the world.
Employees or staff are more natural words in this sentence
Usually we sell knowledge, but in this case, we sell knowledge, time, and tons of patience.
¿And why is so important?
Because I need to learn to say “Not”, and there’s not best moment to learn than when you are under pressure.
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Today I’m going to have a really important meeting. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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On my job, important meetings are done in a formal lunch (which for me is fantastic: I love restaurants and good food).
'take place' sounds more natural in this sentence to explain the setting. A semicolon is used to separate two sentences that are connected but distinct. In the US, it's pretty formal and not often used in casual or even professional writing. |
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Let’s say that eating people understand each other better and are more willing to close deals.
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Well, let’s go to the point: today I’m going to lunch with my best client and, at the same time, my less profitable one. Well, let’s I think you're trying to say, the client is the least profitable of all of your clients. If it's not the least possible, you could say 'a less profitable one' |
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Those two concepts sound opposite but they are true. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have a little consultancy firm and we have two ways to classify our clients: by his potential and by his profitability. I have a little consultancy firm and we have two ways to classify our clients: by |
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On this case I see a lot of potential, but we are spending to much time in projects that don’t give us profit.
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The problem is that our client workers are the less efficient people in the world. The problem is that our client Employees or staff are more natural words in this sentence |
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Usually we sell knowledge, but in this case, we sell knowledge, time, and tons of patience. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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¿And why is so important?
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Because I need to learn to say “Not”, and there’s not best moment to learn than when you are under pressure. Because I need to learn to say “No |
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