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Oct. 28, 2021

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Somebody says I'm a workaholic but I don't think so and, as an evidence, here's a talk between me and my good friend Sloth Lazyboy.

Sloth : couldn't you go to the movies this evening , could you ?

Me : I'm afraid I couldn't, could I ? because I'm too buzy, I've to work overtime.

S : you're kidding me, aren't you ? You never take time to relax, don't you ? You always answer « I need to work overtime », don't you again ?

M : you cannot understand. I have good working conditions, my boss is a nice fellow and when he says « meet your deadlines ! » I know it's fair, isn't it ?

S : never mind, forget, but I think you spend a lot of time at work, you never take time off work, don't you ?

M : yes, you're right, aren't you ? But I have time to relax, I can take time for a nap in the afternoon if I want, so, please, make your own business, would you ?

S : beware, nonetheless, you should care of yourself, shouldn't you? I knew a lot of good men who were real hard workers but all these men , anyway , get the same address « Graveyard number something », RIP, I hope you wouldn't rejoin them , would you ?

M : maybe, you're right, aren't you ? I'm gonna think about it and try to find time to relax, maybe in 2022, thanks for the advice my dear friend !

S: anyway, you should stop taking work home, shouldn't you ?

M: of course, I will, in 2023.

S : It's up to you, so now, let me relax 'cause it's time for to go to my lovely nice morning nap.

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wWorkaholic

Somebody says I'm a workaholic but I don't think so and, as an evidence, here's a talk between me and my good friend Sloth Lazyboy.

Sloth : cWouldn't you like to go to the movies this evening , could you ?

Me : I'm afraid I couldn't, could I ?an't

because I'm too buzsy, I' have to work overtime.

S : you're kidding me, aren't you ?

You never take time to relax, don't you ?

You always answer « I need to work overtime », don't you again ?

M : you cannot understand.

But I have time to relax, I can take time for a nap in the afternoon if I want, so, please, makeind your own business, would you ?

in this sentance the 'would you?' at the end makes sense, but is still not necessary.

I knew a lot of good men who were real hard workers but all these men , anyway , get the same address « Graveyard number something », RIP, I hope you wouldn't rejoin them , wouldill you ?

M: of course, I will, in 2023.

S : It's up to you, so now, let me relax 'cause it's time for to go to my lovelytake a nice morning nap.

'to take a nap', or 'go for a nap'.

Then 'lovely' or 'nice', not both

The 'cause is never written like that, even if it is spoken that way sometimes

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There are a lot of "would you", "could you", and "should you" that aren't needed for the questions to make sense.

workaholic


wWorkaholic

Somebody says I'm a workaholic but I don't think so and, as an evidence, here's a talk between me and my good friend Sloth Lazyboy.


Somebody says I'm a workaholic but I don't think so and, as an evidence, here's a talk between me and my good friend Sloth Lazyboy.

Sloth : couldn't you go to the movies this evening , could you ?


Sloth : cWouldn't you like to go to the movies this evening , could you ?

Me : I'm afraid I couldn't, could I ?


Me : I'm afraid I couldn't, could I ?an't

because I'm too buzy, I've to work overtime.


because I'm too buzsy, I' have to work overtime.

S : you're kidding me, aren't you ?


S : you're kidding me, aren't you ?

You never take time to relax, don't you ?


You never take time to relax, don't you ?

You always answer « I need to work overtime », don't you again ?


You always answer « I need to work overtime », don't you again ?

M : you cannot understand.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have good working conditions, my boss is a nice fellow and when he says « meet your deadlines !


» I know it's fair, isn't it ?


S : never mind, forget, but I think you spend a lot of time at work, you never take time off work, don't you ?


M : yes, you're right, aren't you ?


But I have time to relax, I can take time for a nap in the afternoon if I want, so, please, make your own business, would you ?


But I have time to relax, I can take time for a nap in the afternoon if I want, so, please, makeind your own business, would you ?

in this sentance the 'would you?' at the end makes sense, but is still not necessary.

S : beware, nonetheless, you should care of yourself, shouldn't you?


I knew a lot of good men who were real hard workers but all these men , anyway , get the same address « Graveyard number something », RIP, I hope you wouldn't rejoin them , would you ?


I knew a lot of good men who were real hard workers but all these men , anyway , get the same address « Graveyard number something », RIP, I hope you wouldn't rejoin them , wouldill you ?

M : maybe, you're right, aren't you ?


I'm gonna think about it and try to find time to relax, maybe in 2022, thanks for the advice my dear friend !


S: anyway, you should stop taking work home, shouldn't you ?


M: of course, I will, in 2023.


M: of course, I will, in 2023.

S : It's up to you, so now, let me relax 'cause it's time for to go to my lovely nice morning nap.


S : It's up to you, so now, let me relax 'cause it's time for to go to my lovelytake a nice morning nap.

'to take a nap', or 'go for a nap'. Then 'lovely' or 'nice', not both The 'cause is never written like that, even if it is spoken that way sometimes

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