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Is there a way to say these sentences so that they sound more natural?
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1 can

ๅ…ฑๆ„Ÿใงใใพใ™ใ€‚
I can relate.

2 happen

ๆ—…ใฎๆฅใฏใ‹ใๆจใฆใ€‚
What happens in the us stays in the us.

3 even

ใจใ‚“ใจใ‚“ใง็ต‚ใ‚ใฃใŸใ€‚
We broke even.

4 good

ๆ—ฉใ‚ใซๅ‡บ็™บใ—ใฆๆญฃ่งฃใ ใฃใŸใญ๏ผ
Good call leaving early!

5 people

ใ“ใ“ใฏ่‹ฅ่€…ใŒ้Šใถ็”บใงใ™ใ€‚
This is where young people hang out.

6 keep

็งใ€ๅฃๅ›บใ„ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€‚
I can keep a secret.

ใใฎ็Šถๆ…‹ใ‚’ใ‚ญใƒผใƒ—ใ—ใฆใ€‚
Keep just like that.

7 quiet

ๅฝผใฏใจใฆใ‚‚้™ใ‹ใ ใญใ€‚่‰ฏใ„ๅญใ ใ€‚
He's very quiet. Good boy.

8 at

ๆ„Ÿๆƒ…ใ‚’ๆŒใก่พผใ‚€ใชใ€‚
Leave emotion at the door.

9 library

ๅ›ณๆ›ธ้คจใŒๅฅฝใใ€‚่ฝใก็€ใใ—ใ€ๅฎถใ‚ˆใ‚Šใ‚‚้›†ไธญใงใใ‚‹ใ—ใ€‚ใใ“ใซๆจชใซใชใ‚Œใ‚‹ๅ ดๆ‰€ใ‚ใฃใŸใ‚‰ไฝใ‚€ใ ใ‚ใ†ใชใ€‚

I like libraries. It's calming and I can concentrate better than at home. If I had a place to lie down there, I would live there.

10 man

็”ทใฏใ‚„ใ‚‹ใจใใฏใ‚„ใ‚‰ใชใใ‚ƒใ€‚
A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do.

11 not

็งใŒๆฑ‚ใ‚ใฆใ„ใ‚‹็‰ฉใจใฏ้•ใ†ใ€‚
It's not what I'm looking for.

12 live

ไบบ็”Ÿใฏ๏ผ‘ๅบฆใ—ใ‹ใชใ„ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ‚„ใ‚ŠใŸใ„ใ“ใจใ‚’ใ‚„ใ‚ใ†๏ผ
You only live once.

่ชฐใ‹ใซไป‹่ญทใ•ใ‚ŒใชใŒใ‚‰็”Ÿใใ‚‹ใใ‚‰ใ„ใชใ‚‰ใ€ใใฎๅ‰ใซๆญปใซใŸใ„ใ€‚
I would rather die before that than live while being cared for by someone.

13 without

ใ“ใ‚Œใชใ—ใงใฏ็”Ÿใใฆใ„ใ‘ใชใ„ใ€‚
I can't live without this.

ๅ›ใชใ—ใงใฏใงใใชใ‹ใฃใŸใ‚ˆใ€‚ๆœฌๅฝ“ใซใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ€‚
I couldn't have done it without you. Thank you very much.

14 lose

๏ผˆๅคฑๆ•—ใ—ใฆใ‚‚๏ผ‰ใƒ€ใƒกๅ…ƒใ‚ˆใ€‚
I have nothing to lose.

ใใ‚Œใชใใ—ใกใ‚ƒใฃใŸใ€‚
I lost it.

ใ‚ใ€่šŠใŒใ„ใ‚‹ใ€‚
ใปใ‚“ใจใ ใ€‚ใ‚ใ‚Œใ€่ฆ‹ๅคฑใฃใŸใ€‚ใฉใ“ใ ใ€‚
Ah, there is mosquitoe.
Omg, true. Oh, I lost it. Where is it?

15 blue

้’ใฏใ™ใ”ใไผผๅˆใ†ใญใ€‚
Blue is your color!


16 glove

ๆ‰‹่ข‹ใฃใฆไธ€ใคใ‚‚ๆŒใฃใฆใชใ„ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€่‰ฏใ„ใฎใ‚’ๆŽขใ—ใฆใ‚‹ใ€‚
I don't have one pair of gloves, so I'm looking for a good ones.

17 party

ๆŒใกๅฏ„ใ‚Šใƒ‘ใƒผใƒ†ใ‚ฃใ—ใ‚ˆ๏ผ
Let's have a potluck party!

ใƒ‘ใƒผใƒ†ใ‚ฃใƒผใฎไธปๅ‚ฌ่€…ใฏ่ชฐใชใฎ๏ผŸ
Who is hosting the party?

18 we

ๅ‹้”ใ‚’้€šใ—ใฆๅ‡บไผšใฃใŸใ€‚
We met through a friend.

ๆ—ฅๆœฌใซใƒใƒƒใƒ—ใฎ็ฟ’ๆ…ฃใฏใชใ„ใ€‚
We donโ€™t tip in Japan.

่ฉฑใŒ้•ใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚๏ผˆ็ด„ๆŸใจ้•ใ†๏ผ‰
Thatโ€™s not what we agreed.

19 need

ใ‚ซใƒณใƒšใŒๅฟ…่ฆใ ใ€‚
I need a cheat sheet.

่ฟ”ใ—ใฆใปใ—ใ„ใ€‚
I need it back.


20 some

็งใฎๅˆ†ใ‚‚ๆฎ‹ใ—ใฆใŠใ„ใฆใ€‚
Leave some for me.

ใ‚‚ใ†ๅฐ‘ใ—็งใ‚’ไฟก็”จใ—ใฆใ‚ˆใ€‚
Give me some credit.

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Words 10

Is there a way to say these sentences so that they sound more natural?

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find inlike a textbook.

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ Also, it would be very helpful if you cwould provide a sentence with the word's correct usage if the word is used incorrectly.

1 can

I can relate.

2 happen

What happens in the us stays in the us.

3 even

We broke even.

4 good

Good call leaving early!

5 people

This is where young people hang out.

6 keep

I can keep a secret.

KeepStay just like that.

Keep it just like that.

7 quiet

He's very quiet.

GHe's a good boy.

8 at

Leave your emotions at the door.

ใพใŸใ€

Check your emotions at the door.

9 library

I like libraries.

It'sThey're calming and I can concentrate better there than at home.

If I had a place to lie down there, I would live there.

10 man

A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do.

11 not

It's not what I'm looking for.

12 live

You only live once.

I would rather die before that than live while being cared for by someone.

13 without

I can't live without this.

I couldn't have done it without you.

Thank you very much.

14 lose

I have nothing to lose.

I lost it.

Ah, there is a mosquitoe.

Omg, true.

Oh, I lost it.

Where is it?

15 blue

Blue is your color!

16 glove

I don't have one pair ofany gloves, so I'm looking for a good ones.

17 party

Let's have a potluck party!

Who is hosting the party?

18 we

We met through a friend.

We donโ€™t tip in Japan.

Thatโ€™s not what we agreed.

19 need

I need a cheat sheet.

I need it back.

20 some

Leave some for me.

Give me some credit.

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April 24, 2023

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ใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™๏ผ๏ผ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I can relate.

No problem with this in English.

What happens in the us stays in the us.

The more common saying is "What happens in Vegas stays in Vegas".
For something that means the same but is not an idiom, you can say "what happened stays between us"

GIt was a good call to leavinge early!

"Good call leaving early" works, if you want to sound a bit more formal you can use the version suggested.

KJust keep jusit like that.

The subject in this sentence is missing (Keep what just like that?)

GooHe is a well-behaved boy.

"good boy/girl" is typically used to praise pets. Saying "well-behaved" for children may be more appropriate.

Leave your emotions at the door.

Alternatively, the idiom "don't wear your heart on your sleeve".

If I had a place to lie down there, I would live there.

A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do.

Correct usage, but bear in mind this is quite informal.

I would rather die before that than than to stay alive while being cared for by someone.

Correct usage. In terms of meaning "being cared for" has a positive meaning to it, but if you are thinking of a negative meaning you might consider rephrasing to "needing someone to take care of me". The former sounds like someone did it voluntarily (and therefore the first part of the sentence makes less sense) whereas the latter sounds like an obligation which explains the first part of the sentence.
(Also, life is precious! Don't think you are worthless for whatever reason!)

Ah, there is a mosquitoe.

Note spelling.

Omg,Goodness, it's true.

"Goodness" sounds a bit more proper than "omg".
"omg" can be used informally but in speech it is quite rare.

I don't have onea pair of gloves, so I'm looking for a good ones.

Either you say I don't have a pair of gloves (because pairs of gloves is countable and therefore you need to add "a" in front), or you can say I don't have any gloves (because gloves themselves are uncountable).
For good one, either you say "a good one" (singular) or "good ones" (plural).

I need to get/have it back.

Sounds a bit more natural.

Give me some credit.

Give me some credit = you did something and you want someone to acknowledge your efforts (you want praise)
Have some confidence in me = have more trust in me

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Good usage of words! Well done!

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sho

April 23, 2023

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Thank you so much!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

Words 10


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Is there a way to say these sentences so that they sound more natural?


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I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook.


I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find inlike a textbook.

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ Also, it would be very helpful if you could provide a sentence with the word's correct usage if the word is used incorrectly.


๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ Also, it would be very helpful if you cwould provide a sentence with the word's correct usage if the word is used incorrectly.

1 can


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ๅ…ฑๆ„Ÿใงใใพใ™ใ€‚


I can relate.


I can relate.

No problem with this in English.

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2 happen


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ๆ—…ใฎๆฅใฏใ‹ใๆจใฆใ€‚


What happens in the us stays in the us.


What happens in the us stays in the us.

The more common saying is "What happens in Vegas stays in Vegas". For something that means the same but is not an idiom, you can say "what happened stays between us"

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3 even


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ใจใ‚“ใจใ‚“ใง็ต‚ใ‚ใฃใŸใ€‚


We broke even.


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4 good


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ๆ—ฉใ‚ใซๅ‡บ็™บใ—ใฆๆญฃ่งฃใ ใฃใŸใญ๏ผ


Good call leaving early!


GIt was a good call to leavinge early!

"Good call leaving early" works, if you want to sound a bit more formal you can use the version suggested.

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5 people


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ใ“ใ“ใฏ่‹ฅ่€…ใŒ้Šใถ็”บใงใ™ใ€‚


This is where young people hang out.


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6 keep


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็งใ€ๅฃๅ›บใ„ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€‚


I can keep a secret.


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ใใฎ็Šถๆ…‹ใ‚’ใ‚ญใƒผใƒ—ใ—ใฆใ€‚


Keep just like that.


KJust keep jusit like that.

The subject in this sentence is missing (Keep what just like that?)

KeepStay just like that.

Keep it just like that.

7 quiet


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ๅฝผใฏใจใฆใ‚‚้™ใ‹ใ ใญใ€‚่‰ฏใ„ๅญใ ใ€‚


He's very quiet.


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Good boy.


GooHe is a well-behaved boy.

"good boy/girl" is typically used to praise pets. Saying "well-behaved" for children may be more appropriate.

GHe's a good boy.

8 at


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ๆ„Ÿๆƒ…ใ‚’ๆŒใก่พผใ‚€ใชใ€‚


Leave emotion at the door.


Leave your emotions at the door.

Alternatively, the idiom "don't wear your heart on your sleeve".

Leave your emotions at the door.

ใพใŸใ€ Check your emotions at the door.

9 library


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ๅ›ณๆ›ธ้คจใŒๅฅฝใใ€‚่ฝใก็€ใใ—ใ€ๅฎถใ‚ˆใ‚Šใ‚‚้›†ไธญใงใใ‚‹ใ—ใ€‚ใใ“ใซๆจชใซใชใ‚Œใ‚‹ๅ ดๆ‰€ใ‚ใฃใŸใ‚‰ไฝใ‚€ใ ใ‚ใ†ใชใ€‚


I like libraries.


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It's calming and I can concentrate better than at home.


It'sThey're calming and I can concentrate better there than at home.

If I had a place to lie down there, I would live there.


If I had a place to lie down there, I would live there.

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10 man


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็”ทใฏใ‚„ใ‚‹ใจใใฏใ‚„ใ‚‰ใชใใ‚ƒใ€‚


A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do.


A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do.

Correct usage, but bear in mind this is quite informal.

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11 not


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็งใŒๆฑ‚ใ‚ใฆใ„ใ‚‹็‰ฉใจใฏ้•ใ†ใ€‚


It's not what I'm looking for.


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12 live


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ไบบ็”Ÿใฏ๏ผ‘ๅบฆใ—ใ‹ใชใ„ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ‚„ใ‚ŠใŸใ„ใ“ใจใ‚’ใ‚„ใ‚ใ†๏ผ


You only live once.


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่ชฐใ‹ใซไป‹่ญทใ•ใ‚ŒใชใŒใ‚‰็”Ÿใใ‚‹ใใ‚‰ใ„ใชใ‚‰ใ€ใใฎๅ‰ใซๆญปใซใŸใ„ใ€‚


I would rather die before that than live while being cared for by someone.


I would rather die before that than than to stay alive while being cared for by someone.

Correct usage. In terms of meaning "being cared for" has a positive meaning to it, but if you are thinking of a negative meaning you might consider rephrasing to "needing someone to take care of me". The former sounds like someone did it voluntarily (and therefore the first part of the sentence makes less sense) whereas the latter sounds like an obligation which explains the first part of the sentence. (Also, life is precious! Don't think you are worthless for whatever reason!)

I would rather die before that than live while being cared for by someone.

13 without


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ใ“ใ‚Œใชใ—ใงใฏ็”Ÿใใฆใ„ใ‘ใชใ„ใ€‚


I can't live without this.


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ๅ›ใชใ—ใงใฏใงใใชใ‹ใฃใŸใ‚ˆใ€‚ๆœฌๅฝ“ใซใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ€‚


I couldn't have done it without you.


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Thank you very much.


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14 lose


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๏ผˆๅคฑๆ•—ใ—ใฆใ‚‚๏ผ‰ใƒ€ใƒกๅ…ƒใ‚ˆใ€‚


I have nothing to lose.


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ใใ‚Œใชใใ—ใกใ‚ƒใฃใŸใ€‚


I lost it.


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ใ‚ใ€่šŠใŒใ„ใ‚‹ใ€‚


ใปใ‚“ใจใ ใ€‚ใ‚ใ‚Œใ€่ฆ‹ๅคฑใฃใŸใ€‚ใฉใ“ใ ใ€‚


Ah, there is mosquitoe.


Ah, there is a mosquitoe.

Note spelling.

Ah, there is a mosquitoe.

Omg, true.


Omg,Goodness, it's true.

"Goodness" sounds a bit more proper than "omg". "omg" can be used informally but in speech it is quite rare.

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Oh, I lost it.


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Where is it?


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15 blue


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้’ใฏใ™ใ”ใไผผๅˆใ†ใญใ€‚


Blue is your color!


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16 glove


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ๆ‰‹่ข‹ใฃใฆไธ€ใคใ‚‚ๆŒใฃใฆใชใ„ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€่‰ฏใ„ใฎใ‚’ๆŽขใ—ใฆใ‚‹ใ€‚


I don't have one pair of gloves, so I'm looking for a good ones.


I don't have onea pair of gloves, so I'm looking for a good ones.

Either you say I don't have a pair of gloves (because pairs of gloves is countable and therefore you need to add "a" in front), or you can say I don't have any gloves (because gloves themselves are uncountable). For good one, either you say "a good one" (singular) or "good ones" (plural).

I don't have one pair ofany gloves, so I'm looking for a good ones.

17 party


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ๆŒใกๅฏ„ใ‚Šใƒ‘ใƒผใƒ†ใ‚ฃใ—ใ‚ˆ๏ผ


Let's have a potluck party!


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ใƒ‘ใƒผใƒ†ใ‚ฃใƒผใฎไธปๅ‚ฌ่€…ใฏ่ชฐใชใฎ๏ผŸ


Who is hosting the party?


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18 we


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ๅ‹้”ใ‚’้€šใ—ใฆๅ‡บไผšใฃใŸใ€‚


We met through a friend.


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ๆ—ฅๆœฌใซใƒใƒƒใƒ—ใฎ็ฟ’ๆ…ฃใฏใชใ„ใ€‚


We donโ€™t tip in Japan.


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่ฉฑใŒ้•ใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚๏ผˆ็ด„ๆŸใจ้•ใ†๏ผ‰


Thatโ€™s not what we agreed.


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19 need


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ใ‚ซใƒณใƒšใŒๅฟ…่ฆใ ใ€‚


I need a cheat sheet.


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่ฟ”ใ—ใฆใปใ—ใ„ใ€‚


I need it back.


I need to get/have it back.

Sounds a bit more natural.

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20 some


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็งใฎๅˆ†ใ‚‚ๆฎ‹ใ—ใฆใŠใ„ใฆใ€‚


Leave some for me.


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ใ‚‚ใ†ๅฐ‘ใ—็งใ‚’ไฟก็”จใ—ใฆใ‚ˆใ€‚


Give me some credit.


Give me some credit.

Give me some credit = you did something and you want someone to acknowledge your efforts (you want praise) Have some confidence in me = have more trust in me

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