Sept. 9, 2020
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It's been more than fifty days since I joined the city civilization creation and I hope our city can pass this test. It’s easy to keep our environment clean, but it is difficult to let everyone become civilized. Do it from ourselves, at least no litter. Tidy environment plus high quality citizens equals happiness and beauty.
It's been more than fifty days since I joined the city civilization creation and I hope our city can pass this test.
I'm not entirely sure what you mean by "city civilization creation." Is it a committee to improve the city?
It’s easy to keep our environment clean, but it is difficult to let everyone become civilizedmake people practice good stewardship.
"Let everyone become civilized" has negative connotations...for people to "become civilized" usually suggests that there was something bad or immature about their society before. If you call someone "uncivilized," it may sound insulting, depending on context.
I think "practice good stewardship" is closer to what you're trying to say. It means taking good care of the city and the environment in the ways you describe below.
Do it from ourselves, at leasThe least we can do is not nto litter.
TidyWhen the environment plus high quality citizens equalis clean and the citizens are conscientious, the city is happinessy and beautyiful.
"Clean" sounds more natural to describe an environment. "Conscientious" = thoughtful about their actions, making good decisions, respecting other people.
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Some of the sentences were a bit unclear, but I hope my feedback was helpful! Let me know if you have any questions.
Sept. 9, 2020
Thank you for your correction. This is what I mean in Chinese.
自从参加文明城市创建活动以来已经有五十多天了，我希望我们的城市能通过这次检查验收。保持城市的清洁相对容易，但让每个人都变得文明比较困难。先从我们自身做起吧，至少别乱扔垃圾。整洁的环境加上文明的市民就等于幸福和快乐。
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It's been more than fifty days since I joined the city civilization creation and I hope our city can pass this test. It's been more than fifty days since I joined the city civilization creation and I hope our city can pass this test. I'm not entirely sure what you mean by "city civilization creation." Is it a committee to improve the city? |
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It’s easy to keep our environment clean, but it is difficult to let everyone become civilized. It’s easy to keep our environment clean, but it is difficult to "Let everyone become civilized" has negative connotations...for people to "become civilized" usually suggests that there was something bad or immature about their society before. If you call someone "uncivilized," it may sound insulting, depending on context. I think "practice good stewardship" is closer to what you're trying to say. It means taking good care of the city and the environment in the ways you describe below. |
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Do it from ourselves, at least no litter.
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Tidy environment plus high quality citizens equals happiness and beauty.
"Clean" sounds more natural to describe an environment. "Conscientious" = thoughtful about their actions, making good decisions, respecting other people. |
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