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April 10, 2023

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Word Practice 8.4

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook. Please correct me so that I can sound like a native. 🙇‍♂️
It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!

36 "He"

He is

He was

He has

彼は昔の武勇伝をずっと語っていた。
He often brag about his past exploits.

37 "Become"
Became become becomes

He became famous.

It became taller than me.

After graduation, I became interested in reading.

What became of him?(彼はどうなったのだろうか。)

38 "ill"
worse, worst

I heard she is ill in the hospital.

Do you feel ill?
体調が悪いんですか?

She actually never gets ill.
彼女は本当に病気になったことがない。

She became mentally ill. And killed herself.

It's ill manner”「無作法

39 "during"

during は前置詞で、後ろには「具体的な出来事」の定冠詞や指示代名詞のついた名詞、ingはテストではしない。

I fell asleep during the movie.(上映中に寝てしまいました。)

What's the temperature like during summer?
(夏の間の気温はどのくらいですか)

I don't want to use the train during the morning hours because it's deadly crowded.

Corrections

Word Practice 8.4

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook.

Please correct me so that I can sound like a native.

It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!

36 "He"

He is.

He was.

He has.

He often brags about his past exploits.

He brags ...

37 "Become"

Became, become, becomes

He became famous.

It became taller than meI (am).

After graduation, I became interested in reading.

What became of him?(彼はどうなったのだろうか。)

38 "ill"

worse, worst

I heard she is ill in the hospital.

Do you feel ill?

She actually never gets ill.

She became mentally ill. And killed herself.

It's ill manners”「無作法

39 "during"

I fell asleep during the movie.(上映中に寝てしまいました。)

What's the temperature like during the summer?

また、

What's the temperature like during Summer?

I don't want to use the train during the morning hours because it's deadly crowded.

Feedback

よく出来ました!

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sho

April 15, 2023

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ありがとうございます!!🙇‍♂️

It's alright even if you only change an entirone sentence!!

He often brags about his past exploits.

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sho

April 12, 2023

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Thank you!!🙏

He often bragged about his past exploits.

Past tense of 'to brag'
If present it would be he often 'brags'

I don't want to use the train during the morning hours because it's deamorbidly crowded.

deadly sounds unnatural
'morbidly' doesn't sound completely fluent, but it is similar to deadly

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sho

April 12, 2023

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Thank you!!🙏

Word Practice 8.4


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I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Please correct me so that I can sound like a native.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

🙇‍♂️


It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!


It's alright even if you only change an entirone sentence!!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

36 "He"


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He is


He is.

He was


He was.

He has


He has.

彼は昔の武勇伝をずっと語っていた。


He often brag about his past exploits.


He often bragged about his past exploits.

Past tense of 'to brag' If present it would be he often 'brags'

He often brags about his past exploits.

He often brags about his past exploits.

He brags ...

37 "Become"


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Became become becomes


Became, become, becomes

He became famous.


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It became taller than me.


It became taller than meI (am).

After graduation, I became interested in reading.


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What became of him?(彼はどうなったのだろうか。)


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38 "ill"


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worse, worst


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I heard she is ill in the hospital.


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Do you feel ill?


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体調が悪いんですか?


She actually never gets ill.


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彼女は本当に病気になったことがない。


She became mentally ill. And killed herself.


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It's ill manner”「無作法


It's ill manners”「無作法

39 "during"


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during は前置詞で、後ろには「具体的な出来事」の定冠詞や指示代名詞のついた名詞、ingはテストではしない。


I fell asleep during the movie.(上映中に寝てしまいました。)


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What's the temperature like during summer?


What's the temperature like during the summer?

また、 What's the temperature like during Summer?

(夏の間の気温はどのくらいですか)


I don't want to use the train during the morning hours because it's deadly crowded.


I don't want to use the train during the morning hours because it's deamorbidly crowded.

deadly sounds unnatural 'morbidly' doesn't sound completely fluent, but it is similar to deadly

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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