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April 10, 2023

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Word Practice 8

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook. Please correct me so that I can sound like a native. 🙇‍♂️
It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!

20 In

I was born in Chiba in 1997.

I think the best weather here is in October to me.

You are the most gorgeous woman in the world.

Good for you. You have a good friend. In me.
良かったね。君は僕という友達を持っているよ
 

21 "Of"

That's one of my favorites!

I'm looking for a different color of this.

B: What about a glass of beer? 単位
A: I'm okay.

I think my advice is of no use, but thank yot for listening. 性質

It’s five of three. 時刻
3時5分前だ。

It is kind of you to help me. 性質の主体

22 "That"
Those

A: That'll do for now, thank you.
A: ひとまずそれで十分です。ありがとう。

That’s what I meant.

That's just what I needed after a tough week.

That's what I thought.

That's why I want to change.

Omg. That's where I've wanted to go!

It’s not that cold! そんなに寒くないよ!

That being said
→「そうは言っても / というわけで」

What am I gonna do... the more I get to know you, the more I like you.

To be honest, the fact that you were so kind was surprising.

・The documentary that I saw last night was really good.

1. My English school that is located in Irvine will be closed on Obon week.(アーバインに位置する私の英会話学校は、お盆の週お休みをします。)複数ある
2. My English school, which is located in Irvine, will be closed on Obon week.一つだけ。

Tom is a university student that lives in Osaka. 主格は省略不可

That she's popular is obvious.
① The idea of her being popular has already been mentioned or is under discussion, and
② you want to sound unusually literary or academic in the way you speak.

A=B
The most important point is that I'll try as hard as I can .

同格
The rumor that she is lying is true.

I'm such a coward that I rarely take a risk.

Everyone is so tall that they can touch the ceiling.

She overslept, so she missed the train.結果

I should think carefully so I wouldn't fail. 目的

Both so(such) and that may be omitted.

Each of the four conjunctions, (1) that, (2) so that, (3) so as, and (4) so, all perform the same function.

Corrections

Word Practice 8

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook.

Please correct me so that I can sound like a native.

It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!

20 In

I was born in Chiba in 1997.

I think the best weather here is in October to me.

You already said "I think" so "to me" is unnecessary.

また、

The best weather here to me is in October.

You are the most gorgeous woman in the world.

Good for you.

You have a good friend in me..

In me.

This is a sentence fragment.

21 "Of"

That's one of my favorites!

I'm looking for a different color of this.

また、

I'm looking for this in a different color.

B: What about a glass of beer?

A: I'm okay.

I think my advice is of no use, but thank yotu for listening.

また、

I don't think my advice is any good but thank you for listening.

It’s five of three.

It is kind of you to help me.

22 "That"

Those

A: That'll do for now, thank you.

That’s what I meant.

That's just what I needed after a tough week.

That's what I thought.

That's why I want to change.

Omg.

That's where I've wanted to go!

It’s not that cold!

That being said
→「そうは言っても / というわけで」

What am I gonna do... the more I get to know you, the more I like you.

To be honest, the fact that you were so kind was surprising.

・The documentary that I saw last night was really good.

1. My English school thatwhich is located in Irvine will be closed on Obon weekduring the week of Obon.(アーバインに位置する私の英会話学校は、お盆の週お休みをします。)複数ある

2. My English school, which is located in Irvine, will be closed on Obon weekduring the week of Obon.一つだけ。

Tom is a university student thatwho lives in Osaka.

We always use "who" to reference people.

That she's popular is obvious.

① The idea of her being popular has already been mentioned or is under discussion, and

② you want to sound unusually literary or academic in the way you speak.

The most important point is that I'll try as hard as I can .

The rumor that she is lying is true.

I'm such a coward that I rarely take a risk.

Everyone is so tall that they can touch the ceiling.

She overslept, so she missed the train.結果

I should think carefully so I wouldn't fail.

Both so(such) and that may be omitted.

Each of the four conjunctions, (1) that, (2) so that, (3) so as, and (4) so, all perform the same function.

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上手に書けています!

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sho

April 13, 2023

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ありがとうございます!!🙇‍♂️

Word Practice 8

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind (of English) you would find in a textbook.

Don't need to repeat English

Please correct me so that I can sound like a native.

🙇‍♂️

It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!

I was born in Chibna in 1997.

I think the best weather here is in October to(for me).

As you say "I think" you don't need to add "for me" but it wouldn't necessarily make the setence unnatural

You are the most gorgeous woman in the world.

Good for you.

You have a good friend.

That's one of my favorites!

I'm looking for a different color of this.

B: What about a glass of beer?

A: I'm okay.

I think my advice is of no use, but thank yotu for listening.

It’s five of three.

It is kind of you to help me.

Those

A: That'll do for now, thank you.

That’s what I meant.

That's just what I needed after a tough week.

That's what I thought.

That's why I want to change.

Omg.

That's where I've wanted to go!

It’s not that cold!

What am I gonna do... the more I get to know you, the more I like you.

To be honest, the fact that you were so kind was surprising.

・The documentary that I saw last night was really good.

1. My English school that is located in Irvine will be closed on Obon week.(アーバインに位置する私の英会話学校は、お盆の週お休みをします。)複数ある

2. My English school, which is located in Irvine, will be closed on Obon week.一つだけ。

Tom is a university student that lives in Osaka.

That she's popular is obvious.

"She's popular, that's obvious" would sound better in my opinion

① The idea of her being popular has already been mentioned or is under discussion, and

② you want to sound unusually literary or academic in the way you speak.

The most important point is that I'll try as hard as I can .

The rumor that she is lying is true.

I'm such a coward that I rarely take a risks.

Everyone is so tall that they can touch the ceiling.

She overslept, so she missed the train.結果

I should think carefully so I wouldon't fail.

Both so(such) and that may be omitted.

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Great writing! :)

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sho

April 12, 2023

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Thank you so much!🙏

Word Practice 8


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I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook.


I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind (of English) you would find in a textbook.

Don't need to repeat English

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Please correct me so that I can sound like a native.


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🙇‍♂️


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It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!


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20 In


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I was born in Chiba in 1997.


I was born in Chibna in 1997.

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I think the best weather here is in October to me.


I think the best weather here is in October to(for me).

As you say "I think" you don't need to add "for me" but it wouldn't necessarily make the setence unnatural

I think the best weather here is in October to me.

You already said "I think" so "to me" is unnecessary. また、 The best weather here to me is in October.

You are the most gorgeous woman in the world.


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Good for you.


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You have a good friend.


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You have a good friend in me..

In me.


In me.

This is a sentence fragment.

良かったね。君は僕という友達を持っているよ


21 "Of"


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That's one of my favorites!


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I'm looking for a different color of this.


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I'm looking for a different color of this.

また、 I'm looking for this in a different color.

B: What about a glass of beer?


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単位


A: I'm okay.


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I think my advice is of no use, but thank yot for listening.


I think my advice is of no use, but thank yotu for listening.

I think my advice is of no use, but thank yotu for listening.

また、 I don't think my advice is any good but thank you for listening.

性質


It’s five of three.


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時刻


3時5分前だ。


It is kind of you to help me.


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性質の主体


22 "That"


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A: That'll do for now, thank you.


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A: ひとまずそれで十分です。ありがとう。


That’s what I meant.


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That's just what I needed after a tough week.


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That's what I thought.


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That's why I want to change.


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Omg.


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That's where I've wanted to go!


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It’s not that cold!


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そんなに寒くないよ!


That being said
→「そうは言っても / というわけで」


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What am I gonna do... the more I get to know you, the more I like you.


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To be honest, the fact that you were so kind was surprising.


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・The documentary that I saw last night was really good.


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1. My English school that is located in Irvine will be closed on Obon week.(アーバインに位置する私の英会話学校は、お盆の週お休みをします。)複数ある


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1. My English school thatwhich is located in Irvine will be closed on Obon weekduring the week of Obon.(アーバインに位置する私の英会話学校は、お盆の週お休みをします。)複数ある

2. My English school, which is located in Irvine, will be closed on Obon week.一つだけ。


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2. My English school, which is located in Irvine, will be closed on Obon weekduring the week of Obon.一つだけ。

Tom is a university student that lives in Osaka.


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Tom is a university student thatwho lives in Osaka.

We always use "who" to reference people.

主格は省略不可


That she's popular is obvious.


That she's popular is obvious.

"She's popular, that's obvious" would sound better in my opinion

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① The idea of her being popular has already been mentioned or is under discussion, and


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② you want to sound unusually literary or academic in the way you speak.


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A=B


The most important point is that I'll try as hard as I can .


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同格


The rumor that she is lying is true.


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I'm such a coward that I rarely take a risk.


I'm such a coward that I rarely take a risks.

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Everyone is so tall that they can touch the ceiling.


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She overslept, so she missed the train.結果


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I should think carefully so I wouldn't fail.


I should think carefully so I wouldon't fail.

I should think carefully so I wouldn't fail.

目的


Both so(such) and that may be omitted.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Each of the four conjunctions, (1) that, (2) so that, (3) so as, and (4) so, all perform the same function.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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