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April 10, 2023

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Word Practice 6.2

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook. Please correct me so that I can sound like a native. 🙇‍♂️
It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!
15 "Trip"
Trips
Tripped trips tripping

I'm here on a study trip.
勉強目的で来ました。

How was your trip to the doctor’s?
お医者どうだった?

「出張」→ 「Business trip」 / 「遠足・見学」→ 「Field trip」 / 「修学旅行」→「School trip」

I get the impression that the most fun part of the field trip was on the bus.

遠足で一番楽しかったのは、バスの中だったという印象があります。

Are you okay?" Yeah, I just tripped. : 「大丈夫?」「うん、ちょっとつまずいただけ

Oh, the breakers tripped.
ブレーカーが落ちた

You know how to trip me up well.
君はよく俺の揚げ足の取り方をしってるね。

That movie was very trippy. But I enjoyed it.あの映画かなりぶっ飛んでた。でも楽しかった。

I had a bad trip.
悪酔い

Have a safe trip home.
気をつけて帰ってね

16 "Death"
Deaths

It's the anniversary of my grandfather's death.
命日

Are you in favor of the death penalty?
死刑に賛成?

Death's too good for him. 彼には死刑では甘い。

this sound rude, but what was the cause of death?
失礼ですが、死因は何でしょうか?

I want honorable death!
かっこよく死にたい

As a result, I've become closer to death. 結果的に死期を早めた

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Word Practice 6.2

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook.

Please correct me so that I can sound like a native.

It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!

15 "Trip"

Trips

Tripped, trips, tripping

I'm here ton a study on this trip.

How was your trip to the doctor’s?

I get the impression that the most fun part of the field trip was on the bus.

Are you okay?"

Yeah, I just tripped.

Oh, the breakers tripped.

You know how to trip me up well.

I'm not sure what you're trying to say here.

That movie was very trippy.

But I enjoyed it.あの映画かなりぶっ飛んでた。でも楽しかった。

I had a bad trip.

Have a safe trip home.

16 "Death"

Deaths

It's the anniversary of my grandfather's death.

Are you in favor of the death penalty?

Death's too good for him.

tThis sound rude, but what was the cause of death?

I want an honorable death!

また、
I want to die honorably!

As a result, I've become closer to death.

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上手に書けています!

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sho

April 13, 2023

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ありがとうございます!🙇‍♂️

I'd like to speakmy English more naturally and not the kind of English you wouldto sound more fluent, not clumsy or perfunctory like the kind you might find in a textbook.

Please correct me so that I can sound like a native speaker.

It's alright even iffor you to change an entire sentence!!

I get the impression that the most funfunnest part of the field trip was on the bus ride.

superlative of fun = funnest

Yeah, I just tripped.

Oh, the breakers tripped.

That movie was vsupery trippy.

Minor gripe - 'very trippy' is too cumbersome

But I enjoyed it.あの映画かなりぶっ飛んでた。でも楽しかった。

I had a bad trip.

Have a safe trip home.

Deaths

It's the anniversary of my grandfather's death.

Anniversary can have positive and/or nuptial connotations
Commemoration might be a more appropriate word

Are you in favor of the death penalty?

Death's too good for him.

tThis might sound rude, but what was the cause of death?

I want an honourable death!

As a result, I've become closer to death.

Feedback

Overall pretty good

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sho

April 13, 2023

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That movie was vsupery trippy.

You mean changing "very" to "super" change the meaning?

Word Practice 6.2


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I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook.


I'd like to speakmy English more naturally and not the kind of English you wouldto sound more fluent, not clumsy or perfunctory like the kind you might find in a textbook.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Please correct me so that I can sound like a native.


Please correct me so that I can sound like a native speaker.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

🙇‍♂️


It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!


It's alright even iffor you to change an entire sentence!!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

15 "Trip"


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Trips


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Tripped trips tripping


Tripped, trips, tripping

I'm here on a study trip.


I'm here ton a study on this trip.

勉強目的で来ました。


How was your trip to the doctor’s?


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お医者どうだった?


「出張」→ 「Business trip」 / 「遠足・見学」→ 「Field trip」 / 「修学旅行」→「School trip」


I get the impression that the most fun part of the field trip was on the bus.


I get the impression that the most funfunnest part of the field trip was on the bus ride.

superlative of fun = funnest

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遠足で一番楽しかったのは、バスの中だったという印象があります。


Are you okay?"


Are you okay?"

Yeah, I just tripped.


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: 「大丈夫?」「うん、ちょっとつまずいただけ


Oh, the breakers tripped.


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ブレーカーが落ちた


You know how to trip me up well.


You know how to trip me up well.

I'm not sure what you're trying to say here.

君はよく俺の揚げ足の取り方をしってるね。


That movie was very trippy.


That movie was vsupery trippy.

Minor gripe - 'very trippy' is too cumbersome

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But I enjoyed it.あの映画かなりぶっ飛んでた。でも楽しかった。


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I had a bad trip.


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悪酔い


Have a safe trip home.


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気をつけて帰ってね


16 "Death"


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Deaths


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It's the anniversary of my grandfather's death.


It's the anniversary of my grandfather's death.

Anniversary can have positive and/or nuptial connotations Commemoration might be a more appropriate word

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命日


Are you in favor of the death penalty?


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死刑に賛成?


Death's too good for him.


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彼には死刑では甘い。


this sound rude, but what was the cause of death?


tThis might sound rude, but what was the cause of death?

tThis sound rude, but what was the cause of death?

失礼ですが、死因は何でしょうか?


I want honorable death!


I want an honourable death!

I want an honorable death!

また、 I want to die honorably!

かっこよく死にたい


As a result, I've become closer to death.


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結果的に死期を早めた


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