Women Marriedying Early

Last night, whenas I was talking with a stationery store owner, a woman suddenly put her hand on my shoulder and asked me why I had my hair cut so short.

But I didn't show my confuseion and tell her thatit was because it washort hair is convenient to wash. Then I looked at her up and down.

She was inwearing a dark blue uniform of a, gas station and suniform. She looked like older than me because the wrinkles around her eyes were so deep, and h. Her daughter looked likeabout ten years old.

Run-on sentence. Easier to read when broken down.

I searched her information thoughtoutracked my brain but found nothing.

I even doubted that whether I really knew her.

When I thought again and found out that she wasbout it again, I realized she was one of my middle schoolmates due to her uniform and her daughter.

When I was in college, my friend Turn told me that her friend Bing was going to getetting married.

I know Bing because we weare distant relatives.

Furthermore,While our ages were very close but, she was a grade behind me, thus we talked seldom talk.

All ther information I kneow was from Turnabout her, including her wedding, came from Turn.

Turn has once complained to me that Bing askinvited her to the wedding, but she had to go to. However, she had school and had no time to go back to their hometown to attend the wedding.

There wais a custom that: when you weare invited to a wedding, you need to send a cash gift to your inviter regardless of whether you weare present or not.

This is still an ongoing custom, so it needs to be present tense.

Turn said that Bing just wanted to get the money without considering her situation.

I was having a good time in university and I was shocked whby girls like Bing, who had gone to high school wouldbut still geot married so early.

We should havbe enjoyeding our lives of the early 20s instead.

I knew Bing didn't go to a good college because of her poor scores, butgrades. However, I thought she should not give up studying, which was good for her future.

TShe age when she got married when she was about 21, which wais very young.

Active vs Passive voice: I think active works better here.

The man she married was low-educated, who wais not very educated. He is the son of a gas station owners.

At that time, I couldn't understand at that time why she made such a bad decision.

At presentNow, I know that working hard and being independent in this society is very hard for women, and t. They are taught to live a traditional lifeves: to get married early so that you can choose a good (mostly not poor and younger) man, and m. Marriage is theira new bistarth that can change their lives.