Lately I amhave become very obsessed with a kind of Mmatcha ice-cream sold by a milk tea shop nearb my home. Lately I have become very obsessed with a kind of matcha ice-cream sold by a milk tea shop near my home.

{Lately I have been | These days I am} very obsessed with a kind of Mmatcha ice-cream sold by a milk tea shop nearby home. {Lately I have been | These days I am} very obsessed with a kind of matcha ice-cream sold by a milk tea shop nearby home.

Lately, I am verreally obsessed with a kind of Matcha ice-cream sold by a milk tea shop nearby home. Lately, I am really obsessed with a kind of Matcha ice-cream sold by a milk tea shop nearby home.

"really" is better here than "very".

It is a double-layered kind., It is a double-layered kind,

wit hash a Mmatcha ice-cream layer on the top and a milk one at the bottom. with a matcha ice-cream layer on the top and a milk one at the bottom.

I joined these 2 sentences together to improve the flow of the paragraph.

iIt has a Mmatcha ice-cream layer on the top and milk one aton the bottom. It has a matcha ice-cream layer on the top and milk one on the bottom.

Is the milk layer frozen or liquid? If it’s liquid, then we would call this dessert an ice cream “float.”

it has a Matcha ice-cream layer on the top and a milk one at the bottom. it has a Matcha ice-cream layer on the top and a milk one at the bottom.

Can't really explain the grammar behind it, but the "a" belongs there.

Usually, I would order a takeout, and because of that, the ice-cream is always in a half-melted state. Usually, I order a takeout, and because of that the ice-cream is always in a half-melted state.

Usually, I would order it {as a takeout | to go}, and because of that, the ice-cream is always in a half-melted state. Usually, I would order it {as a takeout | to go}, and because of that, the ice-cream is always in a half-melted state.

Usually, I would order a takeout, and, because of that, the ice-cream is always in a half-melt state. Usually, I would order a takeout and, because of that, the ice-cream is always in a half-melt state.

You need to isolate the "because of that" with commas. I loved this sentence. "Half-melt state" describes who I am.

Usually, I would order a takeout, and because of that, the ice-cream is always in a half-melted state. Usually, I would order a takeout, and because of that, the ice-cream is always in a half-melted state.

Well not that has melted, but it ihas startinged to melt. Well not that has melted, but it has started to melt.

Well not that melted but it is starting to melt. Well not that melted but it is starting to melt.

Well, not that melted, but it is starting to melt. Well, not that melted, but starting to melt.

something is melted, something melts. The adjective is "melted". "Well" is an interjection, it needs to be isolated from the rest of the phrase. The "it is" is implicit here: "Well, it is not that melted, but starting to melt" - no need to repeat it.

Well not that melted but it is starting to melt. Well not that melted but it is starting to melt.

Then II’ve noticed a bizarre thing. I’ve noticed a bizarre thing.

“Then I noticed” doesn’t make sense because, up to this point, you’ve been describing something you do frequently, not a specific occurrence.

Then, I noticed a bizarre thing. Then, I noticed a bizarre thing.

"something bizarre" is an alternative.

The ice-cream always melts from the bottom, whichbut I thought the melting should start from the top. The ice-cream always melts from the bottom, but I thought the melting should start from the top.

The ice-cream always melts from the bottom up, whichen I thought it should start fromat the top. The ice-cream always melts from the bottom up, when I thought it should start at the top.

An action happens from somewhere to somewhere, hence the "from the bottom up" and things start at a certain point. The "when" feels better than the "while".

Like, I heard theat hot air would go up, so shouldn't the ice-cream melts from where the hot air goes? Like, I heard that hot air would go up, so shouldn't the ice-cream melt from where the hot air goes?

Like, I heard the hot air would goes up, so shouldn't the ice-cream melts from where the hot air goes? Like, I heard the hot air goes up, so shouldn't the ice-cream melt from where the hot air goes?

Fact, like science - present tense should + verb :remember that the "s" is because of "does - there's no "does" in this structure. Isn't the milk layer already liquid? How could it melt? Unless it were ice cream too. Also, I think there's no air inside the ice cream and, if so, it's limited and it doesn't affect it this way. Anyways, just a thought.

Like, I heard the hot air would go up, so shouldn't the ice-cream melts from where the hot air goes? Like, I heard the hot air would go up, so shouldn't the ice-cream melt from where the hot air goes?