Day 12 Journaling

Hi everybody!
Today I woke up at 6:30 am and I did my daily Duolingo lesson. After that, I went downstairs to eat my breakfast. Then I went out to see my pets. At 8 am I went back to my house and I did a little part of my homework. That was boring 😴
At noon, I ate lunch with my family. Me and my father had cooked a wok. It was really nice.
Then I read a book called The Circle.
Now I am writing to you. I hope you had a good day. I think that even if you had a bad day, you have to be happy and enjoy the present.
Goodbye 👋

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Day 12 Journaling

At noon, I ate lunch with my family.

It was really nice.

Then I read a book called The Circle.

Now I am writing to you.

I hope you had a good day.

I think that even if you had a bad day, you have to be happy and enjoy the present.

Day 12 Journaling

After that, I went downstairs to eat my breakfast.

Then I went out to see my pets.

At noon, I ate lunch with my family.

It was really nice.

Then I read a book called The Circle.

Now I am writing to you.

I hope you had a good day.

Day 12 Journaling


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Hi everybody!


Hi, everybody! Hi, everybody!

Today I woke up at 6:30 am and I did my daily Duolingo lesson.


Today I woke up at 6:30 am and I did my daily Duolingo lesson. Today I woke up at 6:30 am and did my daily Duolingo lesson.

Today I woke up at 6:30 am and I did my daily Duolingo lesson. Today I woke up at 6:30 am and did my daily Duolingo lesson.

Duo is really effective at making people use it every day, huh? It works on me, at least. lol

After that, I went downstairs to eat my breakfast.


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Then I went out to see my pets.


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Then I went outside to see my pets. Then I went outside to see my pets.

If you are saying you are leaving the house but staying close, I would use "outside" instead of "out" to make that clear. Using "out" usually signals that you are going somewhere farther, e.g., going to town.

At 8 am I went back to my house and I did a little part of my homework.


At 8 am I went back to myinside the house and I did a little parbit of my homework. At 8 am I went back inside the house and did a little bit of homework.

At 8 am I went back to my house and I did a little parbit of my homework. At 8 am I went back to my house and did a little bit of my homework.

"a little part" works but we say "a little bit" about things all the time

That was boring 😴


That was boring. 😴 That was boring. 😴

At noon, I ate lunch with my family.


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Me and my father had cooked a wok.


Me and my father and I had cooked it in a wok. My father and I had cooked it in a wok.

Me and my father had cooked with a wok. Me and my father cooked with a wok.

Something feels missing with this sentence - you should say what you cooked. E.g., we cooked chicken with a wok / we cooked lunch with a wok, or even we cooked it with a wok (since you just mentioned lunch)

It was really nice.


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Then I read a book called The Circle.


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Now I am writing to you.


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I hope you had a good day.


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I think that even if you had a bad day, you have to be happy and enjoy the present.


I think that even if you have had a bad day, you have to be happy and enjoy the present. I think that even if you have had a bad day, you have to be happy and enjoy the present.

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Goodbye 👋


Goodbye. 👋 Goodbye. 👋

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