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Components of a set of fishing gear when I was a child

Fishing rods
Hemp stalks, bamboos and sorghum stalks. These materials are easy to find in the countryside.

Fishing lines
Every family has sewing threads which are used to mend clothes.

Fishing hooks
Sewing needles that are used to mend clothes are popular in every family. When we make a hook, we heat a needle with an oil lamp first, then bend it into a hook with a hand plier.

Fishing baits
Flour dough, flies, earthworms, niblets and so on. These “baits” are very easy to find in rural areas.

Fishing floats
Sorghum peduncles, garlic stalks, chicken feathers. All of these are common in the countryside.

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A Journal Entry

These materials are easy to find in the countryside.

These “baits” are very easy to find in rural areas.

All of these are common in the countryside.

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Jack

April 28, 2025

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A Journal Entry

These materials are easy to find in the countryside.

Fishing lines Every family has sewing threads which are used to mend clothes.

Fishing hooks Sewing needles that are used to mend clothes are popular in every family.

When we make a hook, we heat a needle with an oil lamp first, then bend it into a hook with a hand plier.

Fishing floats Sorghum peduncles, garlic stalks, chicken feathers.

All of these are common in the countryside.

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Jack

April 28, 2025

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A Journal Entry

Components of a set of fishing gear when I was a child Fishing rods Hemp stalks, bamboos and sorghum stalks.

These materials are easy to find in the countryside.

Fishing lines Every family has sewing threads which are used to mend clothes.

Fishing hooks Sewing needles that are used to mend clothes are popular in every family.

When we make a hook, we heat a needle with an oil lamp first, then bend it into a hook with a hand plier.

Fishing floats Sorghum peduncles, garlic stalks, chicken feathers.

All of these are common in the countryside.

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Components of a set of fishing gear when I was a child Fishing rods Hemp stalks, bamboos and sorghum stalks.


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Components of a set of fishing gear from when I was a child . Fishing rods Hemp stalks, bamboos and sorghum stalks. Components of a set of fishing gear from when I was a child. Fishing rods Hemp stalks, bamboo and sorghum stalks.

Generally, "bamboo" is uncountable. Typically, we might use "bamboos" when talking about different types/species of bamboo, e.g. "Bamboos are some of the fastest-growing plants in the world."

Components of a set of fishing gear when I was a child . Fishing rods Hemp stalks, bamboos and sorghum stalks. Components of a set of fishing gear when I was a child. Fishing rods Hemp stalks, bamboos and sorghum stalks.

These materials are easy to find in the countryside.


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Fishing floats Sorghum peduncles, garlic stalks, chicken feathers.


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Fishing floats . Sorghum peduncles, garlic stalks, and chicken feathers. Fishing floats. Sorghum peduncles, garlic stalks, and chicken feathers.

All of these are common in the countryside.


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Fishing lines Every family has sewing threads which are used to mend clothes.


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Fishing lines . Every family has sewing threads which are used to mend clothes. Fishing lines. Every family has sewing threads which are used to mend clothes.

Fishing hooks Sewing needles that are used to mend clothes are popular in every family.


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Fishing hooks . Sewing needles that are used to mend clothes are popular in every family. Fishing hooks. Sewing needles that are used to mend clothes are popular in every family.

When we make a hook, we heat a needle with an oil lamp first, then bend it into a hook with a hand plier.


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When we make a hook, we heat a needle with an oil lamp first, and then bend it into a hook with a hand plier. When we make a hook, we heat a needle with an oil lamp first, and then bend it into a hook with a hand plier.

Fishing baits Flour dough, flies, earthworms, niblets and so on.


Fishing baits Flour dough, flies, earthworms, niblets and so on. Fishing bait Flour dough, flies, earthworms, niblets and so on.

It's much more common for "bait" to be in singular form. "Bait" carries more the idea of a clump or collection of "bait". Think of it almost like a material, like dirt or water.

Fishing baits Flour dough, flies, earthworms, niblets and so on. Fishing bait Flour dough, flies, earthworms, niblets and so on.

"bait" is uncountable and hence a singular noun. If we want it to be countable, we'd say "a piece of bait" or "pieces of bait".

Fishing baits . Flour dough, flies, earthworms, niblets and so on. Fishing baits. Flour dough, flies, earthworms, niblets and so on.

These “baits” are very easy to find in rural areas.


Theseis “baitsareis very easy to find in rural areas. This “baitis very easy to find in rural areas.

TheseSuch “baitsareis very easy to find in rural areas. Such “baitis very easy to find in rural areas.

Since "bait" is singular, "these" and "are" should also be changed to reflect this.

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