May 26, 2025
My name is YUte.
I want to speak English about a use in my job and to be qualify.
This is my self introduction. I would be happy to read it.
-I was Pole vault athlete.
- I worked to elementary school & secondary school in Aomori prefecture.
- In elementary school, I supported for student of first grade, more over, In secondary school, I taught health and physical education for all of the student & worked with student with impairment (Hearing impairment)
- I worked in companies that help people find work for persons with impairments about for person with learning disabilities & mentally challenged person.
- In my current company, I supported Country-focused Program & Coral Propagation Laboratory in Okinawa.
- My plans to be involved in the introduction of small-scale inland aquaculture and aquaponics as a means of promoting social independence for people with impairment.
Thank you.
Nice to meet you
My name is YUte.
I want to speak enough English about a use in my job and to be qualifyto be qualified for my job.
I want to speak enough English to be qualified for my job.
This is my self introduction.
I would be happy toif you could read it.
I would be happy if you could read it.
-I was Pam a former pole vault athleter.
-I am a former pole vaulter.
- I worked toat both elementary school &and secondary schools in Aomori prefecture.
- I worked at both elementary and secondary schools in Aomori prefecture.
- InAt the elementary school, I suppwortked forwith student ofs in the first grade, more over, In. At the secondary school, I taught health and physical education for all of the student &s, and worked with students with impairment (Hho have hearing impairment)
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- I worked in companies that help people find work for persons with impairments about for person with learning disabilities & mentally challenged personwith impairments, such as learning or intellectual disabilities, find jobs.
- At the elementary school, I worked with students in the first grade. At the secondary school, I taught health and physical education for all students, and worked with students who have hearing impairments.
- I worked in companies that help people with impairments, such as learning or intellectual disabilities, find jobs.
"In elementary school" could sound like you were a student.
If you were a teacher for first grade students, it would be better to say "I was a first grade teacher." or "I taught first grade"
"Mentally challenged person" is outdated and may be considered offensive, its better to use "people with intellectual disabilities"
- In my current company, I supported the Country-focused Program & the Coral Propagation Laboratory in Okinawa. - In my current company, I supported the Country-focused Program & the Coral Propagation Laboratory in Okinawa.
- My plan is to be involved in the introduction of small-scale inland aquaculture and aquaponics as a means of promoting social independence for people with impairmentdisabilities.
- My plan is to be involved in the introduction of small-scale inland aquaculture and aquaponics as a means of promoting social independence for people with disabilities.
"Impairments" is correct, but "disabilities" is more common.
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My name is YUute.
My name is Yute.
I want to speak English about aenough to use in my job and to be qualifyied.
I want to speak English enough to use in my job and to be qualified.
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I would be happy for you to read it. I would be happy for you to read it.
-I was Pa pole vault athlete.
-I was a pole vault athlete.
- I worked toat an elementary school & secondary school in Aomori prefecture.
- I worked at an elementary school & secondary school in Aomori prefecture.
- In elementary school, I supported for student of first grade, more over, In secondary school, I taught health and physical education for all of the student &first and second graders and also worked with students with impairment (Hhearing impairment)
s.
- I worked for/in companies that help people find work for persons with impairments about for personimpaired people with learning disabilities &and who are mentally challenged person.
- In elementary school, I taught heath and physical education for first and second graders and also worked with students with hearing impairments.
- I worked for/in companies that help people find work for impaired people with learning disabilities and who are mentally challenged
- My plans are to be involved in the introduction of small-scale inland aquaculture and aquaponics as a means of promoting social independence for people with impairment. - My plans are to be involved in the introduction of small-scale inland aquaculture and aquaponics as a means of promoting social independence for people with impairment.
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- In my current company, I supported Country-focused Program & Coral Propagation Laboratory in Okinawa. - In my current company, I supported the Country-focused Program & the Coral Propagation Laboratory in Okinawa. - In my current company, I supported the Country-focused Program & the Coral Propagation Laboratory in Okinawa. |
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- My plans to be involved in the introduction of small-scale inland aquaculture and aquaponics as a means of promoting social independence for people with impairment. - My plans are to be involved in the introduction of small-scale inland aquaculture and aquaponics as a means of promoting social independence for people with impairment. - My plans are to be involved in the introduction of small-scale inland aquaculture and aquaponics as a means of promoting social independence for people with impairment.
- My plan is to be involved in the introduction of small-scale inland aquaculture and aquaponics as a means of promoting "Impairments" is correct, but "disabilities" is more common. |
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- I worked to elementary school & secondary school in Aomori prefecture.
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- In elementary school, I supported for student of first grade, more over, In secondary school, I taught health and physical education for all of the student & worked with student with impairment (Hearing impairment) - I worked in companies that help people find work for persons with impairments about for person with learning disabilities & mentally challenged person.
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- "In elementary school" could sound like you were a student. If you were a teacher for first grade students, it would be better to say "I was a first grade teacher." or "I taught first grade" "Mentally challenged person" is outdated and may be considered offensive, its better to use "people with intellectual disabilities" |
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