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Title capitalization rules

The cafeteria has always been a meeting pointlace for workers, from both our company and others around it, since it wais open to everyone. The cafeteria has always been a meeting place for workers, from both our company and others around it, since it is open to everyone.

"Place" is a little more fitting since this is a physical location. ", since it was open..." implies the cafeteria is no longer there or open

However, recently it has experienced a big drop in business, leading it close to becoming bankrupt. However, recently it has experienced a big drop in business, leading it close to becoming bankrupt.

Making the sentence a little more complete

As one may guess from explained above, it mightight infer from this information, it could be, in theory, a profitable business, asince there was a high number of fixed clients before. As one might infer from this information, it could be, in theory, a profitable business, since there was a high number of fixed clients before.

I would use "guess" for something more random and difficult to know. When you can deduce something probably from set information = "infer." Since you mentioned patronage has since decreased, I added "before" at the end

Nevertheless, the situation changed, specifically for the worse, since the previous owner retired and a new young persone took over it. Nevertheless, the situation changed, specifically for worse, since the previous owner retired and a new young person took over.

The set expressions are "for worse" or "for the worst," the latter being a bit more emphatic.

Since then, there washave been several issues which have resulted in the staff deciding to (go to another places to have breakfast and lunch / eat elsewhere). Since then, there have been several issues which have resulted in the staff deciding to (go to other places to have breakfast and lunch / eat elsewhere).

Another alternative to end the phrase if you wanted to be concise

In short, prices has beenve risen, whereas quality and service have decreased. In short, prices have risen, whereas quality and service have decreased.

By no means, could our personnel could afford to pay three times the price for lunch mocompared thano previously, even morespecially going from one day to another and keepingon the same salary. By no means could our personnel afford to pay three times the price for lunch compared to previously, especially going from one day to another on the same salary.

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In this sense, why would one pay for something which it could have been cooked in a microwave? In this sense, why would one pay for something which could have been cooked in a microwave?

Last but not least, the service wereas often not able to serve food on time, what it has resulted late, causing some of the staff to arrivinge late ato work inat the same company where the cafeteria is settledin the same (building / complex). Last but not least, the service was often late, causing some of the staff to arrive late to work at the company in the same (building / complex).

That was due to the fact that the half of waitservers and cookers were fired. That was due to the fact that the half of servers and cooks were fired.

"Server" is more encompassing and a better fit for a cafeteria environment. "Cooker" isn't a word used as a title, but rather "cook" for more casual restaurants (cafeterias, fast food) or "chef" for more classic restaurants

Just in this wayWith only this change, it would be possible to revert the current scenario. With only this change, it would be possible to revert the current scenario.

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