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These days, more and more young people live without TV. I also didn't buy TV when I started living on my own. One of the reasons is that we are supposed to be imposed high receiving fee by NHK which is a Japanese government-owned public broadcaster. Its way of collecting the fee becomes controversial, and some activists made the public party called "The party that protects those who don't pay the NHK license fee".

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Without TV

These days, more and more young people live without TV.

I also didn't buy a TV when I started living on my own.

One of the reasons now is that we are supposed to be imposed high receiving fee by NHK which is a Japanese government-owned public broadcaster.the NHK, a Japanese government-owned public broadcaster, is supposed to be imposing a high receiving fee.

Its way of collecting the feefees has becomes controversial, and some activists made thea public party called, "The party that protects those who don't pay the NHK license fee"."

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tommy

Feb. 12, 2022

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Thank you!

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These days, more and more young people live without TV.

I also didn't buy a TV when I started living on my own.

One of the reasons is that we are supposed to be imposed high receiving fee by NHK which is a Japanese government-owned public broadcasterbecause NHK (a Japanese government-owned public broadcasting service) is supposed to be imposing a high receiving fee.

I rephrased the sentence to sound more natural in English.

ItNHK's way of collecting the fee has becomes controversial, and some activists madecreated the public party called "The pParty tThat pProtects tThose wWho dDon't pPay tThe NHK lLicense fFee"."

When you are quoting the name of something, capitalize the words in the name.

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Well done!

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tommy

Feb. 12, 2022

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Thank you!

Without TV

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These days, more and more young people live without TV.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I also didn't buy TV when I started living on my own.

I also didn't buy a TV when I started living on my own.

I also didn't buy a TV when I started living on my own.

One of the reasons is that we are supposed to be imposed high receiving fee by NHK which is a Japanese government-owned public broadcaster.

One of the reasons is that we are supposed to be imposed high receiving fee by NHK which is a Japanese government-owned public broadcasterbecause NHK (a Japanese government-owned public broadcasting service) is supposed to be imposing a high receiving fee.

I rephrased the sentence to sound more natural in English.

One of the reasons now is that we are supposed to be imposed high receiving fee by NHK which is a Japanese government-owned public broadcaster.the NHK, a Japanese government-owned public broadcaster, is supposed to be imposing a high receiving fee.

Its way of collecting the fee becomes controversial, and some activists made the public party called "The party that protects those who don't pay the NHK license fee".

ItNHK's way of collecting the fee has becomes controversial, and some activists madecreated the public party called "The pParty tThat pProtects tThose wWho dDon't pPay tThe NHK lLicense fFee"."

When you are quoting the name of something, capitalize the words in the name.

Its way of collecting the feefees has becomes controversial, and some activists made thea public party called, "The party that protects those who don't pay the NHK license fee"."

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