Aug. 23, 2025
Wish me luck
My lovely soulmate has been very ill lately. I'm trying to stay calm, but I can't do it. In childhood his eye was damaged. Now the eye's retina was detached. The first operation was completed perfectly! But my husband is so nervous person! It's bad for his eye. Today his eye saw a weird picture. I told my soulmate "GO TO THE DOCTOR" and now I'm waiting for the result.
Wish me luck
My lovely soulmate has been very ill lately.
I'm trying to stay calm, but I can't do it.
InDuring his childhood his eye was damaged.
Now the eye's retina wais detached.
The first operation was a completed perfectly! success.
But my husband is souch a nervous person!
It's bad for his eye.
Today his eye saw a weird picture in his eye.
I told my soulmate "GO TO THE DOCTOR" and now I'm waiting for the result.
Aug. 24, 2025
Thanks a lot!
InDuring his childhood his eye was damaged.
Now the eye'Recently his retina wasbecame detached.
"Now" is present tense, "was" is past tense, they don't go together.
You don't need to specify "eye's retina", people understand you're talking about the eye when you talk about the retina
But my husband is soa very nervous person!
Today his eye saw a weird picturimage.
picture is like a drawing or something displayed on a screen. Image is more generic and better for this case.
Aug. 24, 2025
Thank you! Your comments are very helpful.
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My lovely soulmate has been very ill lately. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm trying to stay calm, but I can't do it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In childhood his eye was damaged.
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Now the eye's retina was detached.
"Now" is present tense, "was" is past tense, they don't go together. You don't need to specify "eye's retina", people understand you're talking about the eye when you talk about the retina Now the eye's retina |
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The first operation was completed perfectly! The first operation was a complete |
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But my husband is so nervous person! But my husband is But my husband is s |
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It's bad for his eye. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today his eye saw a weird picture. Today his eye saw a weird picture is like a drawing or something displayed on a screen. Image is more generic and better for this case. Today h |
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