Jan. 4, 2023
Wirting Challenge, Day 95
Today is the 95th day of my daily English challenge.
My mother, my nieces and nephew were traveling to Algiers today at 9 pm but My mother canceled the reservation because the children may be sleeping at the airport that's why will be traveling tomorow at the afternoon. The children I were happy to staying one day more but at this moment I feel so sad to see the children going tomorrow.
My mother, my nieces and nephew werenephew, and nieces, were supposed to traveling to Algiers today at 9 pm, but Mmy mother canceled the reservation because the children may behave ended up sleeping at the airport. that's why will be traveling tomorow at the afternoon.
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- were supposed to* since they did not travel.
The children I were happy to be staying one day more but at this momenan extra day, but I feel so sad to see the children goingm go tomorrow.
Jan. 5, 2023
Thank you so much.
Wirting Challenge, Day 95
Today is the 95th day of my daily English challenge.
My mother, my nieces and nephew were supposed to be traveling to Algiers today at 9 pm but Mmy mother canceled the reservation because the children may bend up sleeping at the airport t. That's why they will be traveling tomorrow atin the afternoon.
I think this is what you're trying to say but I'm not sure.
The children and I were happy to staying one day morefor one more day's stay but at this moment I feel so sad to seeknow that the children are going home tomorrow.
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Yes, I very much understand this. Partings are difficult but you'll see them again! Good work!
Jan. 5, 2023
Thank you so much.
My mMother, my nNieces and nNephew were traveling to Algiers today at 9 pm, but Mmy mMother cancelled the reservation because the children may bare sleeping at the airport t. That's why they will be traveling tomorrow at the afternoon.
The children I were happy toI was so happy to see the children staying one day more, but at this moment I feel so sad to see the children going tomorrow.
Jan. 5, 2023
Thank you so much.
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My mother, my nieces and nephew were traveling to Algiers today at 9 pm but My mother canceled the reservation because the children may be sleeping at the airport that's why will be traveling tomorow at the afternoon. My My mother, I think this is what you're trying to say but I'm not sure. My mother, - It’s a bit more clear when you separate your mother, nephew, and nieces through commas. - were supposed to* since they did not travel. |
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The children I were happy to staying one day more but at this moment I feel so sad to see the children going tomorrow.
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