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courageuse19

Feb. 22, 2023

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Wirting Challenge, Day 144

Today is day 144 of my daily English challenge. I still have dental pain. Tomorrow I have an appointment to the dentist but if the pain not stoped. I'll call the dentist and to tell my situation.

I filmed other new recipe. My mom liked it!

Although have dental pain but I learned a new Spanish lesson. I was delighted to discover and learn new words.

I prepare a new journal and I am sure that Mari😃 would be like it and encourged me 😊

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Wirting Challenge, Day 144

Today is day 144 of my daily English challenge.

I still have dental pain.

or,

I still have a toothache.

Tomorrow I have an appointment towith the dentist but I can't wait if theis pain nodoesn't stoped.

I'll call the dentist and to tell them about my situation.

I filmed another new recipe.

Congratulations!

My mom liked it!

Although I have dental pain but I learna toothache, I studied a new Spanish lesson.

I was delighted to discover and learn new words.

I prepared a new journal and I am sure that Mari😃 would be like it and encouraged me. 😊

Of course! 😊 Good for you!

Feedback

As always, well done!

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courageuse19

Feb. 23, 2023

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Thank you so much Mari.

Wirting Challenge, Day 144

Today is day 144 of my daily English challenge.

I still have dental pain.

This sentence is fine, but it sounds quite technical. Instead, you might say: "My teeth/tooth still hurts."

Tomorrow I have an appointment towith the dentist but if the pain has not stopped.

(Or: Tomorrow I have an appointment to go to the dentist if the pain continues.)

I'll call the dentist and to tell them my situation.

Or: "I'll call the dentist to tell them my situation".

I filmed another new recipe.

My mom liked it!

Although I have dental pain but I, I have learned a new bit of Spanish lesson.

I was delighted to discover and learn new words.

I will prepare a new journal and I am sure that Mari😃 would beill like it and encouraged me 😊

Feedback

Great writing - I hope your dental pain clears up!

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courageuse19

Feb. 23, 2023

2

Thank you for encourage me.

Wirting Challenge, Day 144

Today is day 144 of my daily English challenge.

I still have dental pain.

I hope you get better!

Tomorrow I have an appointment to the dentist but if the pain has not stopped.

I'll call the dentist and to tell my situation.

I filmed another new recipe.

My mom liked it!

Although have dental pain but, I learned a new Spanish lesson.

You could also say "I did a new spanish lesson"

I was delighted to discover and learn new words.

I am prepareing a new journal and I am sure that Mari😃 would be like it and encourged me 😊

Feedback

Great job!

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courageuse19

Feb. 22, 2023

2

Thank you so much.

Wirting Challenge, Day 144


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today is day 144 of my daily English challenge.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I still have dental pain.


I still have dental pain.

I hope you get better!

I still have dental pain.

This sentence is fine, but it sounds quite technical. Instead, you might say: "My teeth/tooth still hurts."

I still have dental pain.

or, I still have a toothache.

Tomorrow I have an appointment to the dentist but if the pain not stoped.


Tomorrow I have an appointment to the dentist but if the pain has not stopped.

Tomorrow I have an appointment towith the dentist but if the pain has not stopped.

(Or: Tomorrow I have an appointment to go to the dentist if the pain continues.)

Tomorrow I have an appointment towith the dentist but I can't wait if theis pain nodoesn't stoped.

I'll call the dentist and to tell my situation.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'll call the dentist and to tell them my situation.

Or: "I'll call the dentist to tell them my situation".

I'll call the dentist and to tell them about my situation.

I filmed other new recipe.


I filmed another new recipe.

I filmed another new recipe.

I filmed another new recipe.

Congratulations!

My mom liked it!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Although have dental pain but I learned a new Spanish lesson.


Although have dental pain but, I learned a new Spanish lesson.

You could also say "I did a new spanish lesson"

Although I have dental pain but I, I have learned a new bit of Spanish lesson.

Although I have dental pain but I learna toothache, I studied a new Spanish lesson.

I was delighted to discover and learn new words.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I prepare a new journal and I am sure that Mari😃 would be like it and encourged me 😊


I am prepareing a new journal and I am sure that Mari😃 would be like it and encourged me 😊

I will prepare a new journal and I am sure that Mari😃 would beill like it and encouraged me 😊

I prepared a new journal and I am sure that Mari😃 would be like it and encouraged me. 😊

Of course! 😊 Good for you!

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