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SummerTeaWater

Nov. 30, 2021

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Winter Is Coming

It rained this morning and now it becomes very cold.

After raining, many trees fell their leaves, and the streets are covered with fallen leaves.

With the leaves and the chilly weather, I think that the winter is closer than yesterday.

Now it is time to take out my winter clothes, and put them on.

Good bye November, and welcome December.

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Winter Is Coming

It rained this morning, and now it is becomesing very cold.

After raining, many trees felllost their leaves, and the streets are covered with fallen leaves.

With the leaves and the chilly weather, I think that the winter is closer than yesterdaygetting closer.

Now it is time to take out my winter clothes, and put them on.

Good bye November, and welcome December.

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Nice work! :)

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SummerTeaWater

Dec. 1, 2021

402

고맙습니다!

It rained this morning and now it's becomesing very cold.

After the raining, many trees fellhad lost their leaves, and the streets awere covered with fallen leaves.

With the leaves and the chilly weather, I think that the winter is closer than yesterday.

Now it is time to take out my winter clothes, and putstart wearing them on.

Good bye Nnovember, and welcome Ddecember.

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Well done! Keep warm :)

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SummerTeaWater

Nov. 30, 2021

402

Thank you so much.

Winter Is Coming


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It rained this morning and now it becomes very cold.


It rained this morning and now it's becomesing very cold.

It rained this morning, and now it is becomesing very cold.

After raining, many trees fell their leaves, and the streets are covered with fallen leaves.


After the raining, many trees fellhad lost their leaves, and the streets awere covered with fallen leaves.

After raining, many trees felllost their leaves, and the streets are covered with fallen leaves.

With the leaves and the chilly weather, I think that the winter is closer than yesterday.


With the leaves and the chilly weather, I think that the winter is closer than yesterday.

With the leaves and the chilly weather, I think that the winter is closer than yesterdaygetting closer.

Now it is time to take out my winter clothes, and put them on.


Now it is time to take out my winter clothes, and putstart wearing them on.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Good bye November, and welcome December.


Good bye Nnovember, and welcome Ddecember.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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