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Winter day

Today It is a cold day.

We are in December. The last month of the year. Normally, this month, the days are short
and the sun or the light is only a few hours in the sky

Today also It rained . On TV news say that the snow appears on mountains.

I think that people have problems with his encouragement level.

In summer, the sun is joy. In winter clouds a lot so people have sadness.

I like rain so this day for me is good

Corrections

Winter day

Today I, it is a cold day.

We are in December.

The last month of the year.

This is a sentence fragment and should be combined with the last sentence: "We are in December, the last month of the year."

Normally, during this month, the days are short

and the sun or the light is only a few hours in the skywe only have a few hours of daylight.

Or something like: "and the sun stays in the sky for only a few hours."

Today it also It rained .

On TV the news , they say that the snow has appearsed on the mountains.

"On TV" is understood from "on the news," generally speaking, but you could also write "on the news on TV."

I think that people have problems with his encouragement level.

I'm not sure what you meant to say here. "His encouragement level" indicates that you're referring to a specific person, but you didn't mention anyone before this.

In summer, the sun is joy.

In winter clouds a lot , there are a lot of clouds, so people havare sadness.

I like rain so this today for me is good

"This day" sounds more like we're referring to a specific day in the past or future, and less like we're referring to right now.

Winter dDay

Today It iit’s a cold day.

We are in December.

“We are” is often written as “We’re”.

The last month of the year.

Normally, in this month, the days are shorter.

“The days are short”, would also be correct but I wasn’t exactly sure of which one you were trying to say.

and tThe sun or the light is only lasts a few hours in the sky

Today it also It rained .

On TV news , the newscaster say id that the snow appearsed on the mountains.

I think that people have problems with his encouragement level.

In winter there are clouds a lot , so people havare sadness.

I like rain, so this day for me is good for me.

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Great Job! Just a few corrections!

Winter day


Winter dDay

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today It is a cold day.


Today It iit’s a cold day.

Today I, it is a cold day.

We are in December.


We are in December.

“We are” is often written as “We’re”.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The last month of the year.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The last month of the year.

This is a sentence fragment and should be combined with the last sentence: "We are in December, the last month of the year."

Normally, this month, the days are short


Normally, during this month, the days are short

Normally, in this month, the days are shorter.

“The days are short”, would also be correct but I wasn’t exactly sure of which one you were trying to say.

and the sun or the light is only a few hours in the sky


and tThe sun or the light is only lasts a few hours in the sky

and the sun or the light is only a few hours in the skywe only have a few hours of daylight.

Or something like: "and the sun stays in the sky for only a few hours."

Today also It rained .


Today it also It rained .

Today it also It rained .

On TV news say that the snow appears on mountains.


On TV news , the newscaster say id that the snow appearsed on the mountains.

On TV the news , they say that the snow has appearsed on the mountains.

"On TV" is understood from "on the news," generally speaking, but you could also write "on the news on TV."

I think that people have problems with his encouragement level.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think that people have problems with his encouragement level.

I'm not sure what you meant to say here. "His encouragement level" indicates that you're referring to a specific person, but you didn't mention anyone before this.

In summer, the sun is joy.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In winter clouds a lot so people have sadness.


In winter there are clouds a lot , so people havare sadness.

In winter clouds a lot , there are a lot of clouds, so people havare sadness.

I like rain so this day for me is good


I like rain, so this day for me is good for me.

I like rain so this today for me is good

"This day" sounds more like we're referring to a specific day in the past or future, and less like we're referring to right now.

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