Dec. 13, 2023
Winter
From November to January of the following year, we are into winter days. It's rare for us to see snow during this period, however, in some mountainous areas with higher altitudes, over 1000 meters, different types of snowfall be observed. There is no regulation requiring to set up heat devices in houses.
When I was younger, it was difficult to find the sun shining in winter. Fortunately, the environmental situation has improved significantly, since many destructive factories have been moved to the rural areas or far away from the city. As a result, people in my city can enjoy more sunny days than before.
From November through to January of the followingnext year, we are now into winter days.
It's rare for us to see snow during this period, however, in some mountainous areas with higher altitudes, such as those over 1000 meters, different types of snowfall can be observed.
There is no regulation requirgarding tohe set upting up of heat devices in houses.
If you mean that anyone can set up a device, then "regarding" might be a better word.
When I was younger, it was difficult to findsee the sun shining in winter.
Fortunately, the environmental situation has improved significantly, since many destructive factories have been moved to the rural areas or far away from the cityies.
As a result, people in my city can enjoy more sunny days than before.
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Good writing!
Dec. 13, 2023
Thank you for your corrections! :-)
From November to January of the following year, we are into winter days.
This is a little wordy. More naturally we would say:
"November to January is considered winter" or "From November to January we are in winter".
It's rare for us to see snow during this period, h. However, in some mountainous areas with higher altitudes, over 1000 meters, different types of snowfall be observed.
There is no regulation requiring to set up of heating devices in houses.
Fortunately, the environmental situation has improved significantly, sinc. This is because many destructive factories have been moved to the rural areas or, far away from the city.
Dec. 13, 2023
thank you for your corrections! :-)
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From November to January of the following year, we are into winter days. From November to January of the following year, we are into winter days. This is a little wordy. More naturally we would say: "November to January is considered winter" or "From November to January we are in winter". From November through to January |
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It's rare for us to see snow during this period, however, in some mountainous areas with higher altitudes, over 1000 meters, different types of snowfall be observed. It's rare for us to see snow during this period It's rare for us to see snow during this period, however, in some mountainous areas with higher altitudes, such as those over 1000 meters, different types of snowfall can be observed. |
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There is no regulation requiring to set up heat devices in houses. There is no regulation requiring There is no regulation re If you mean that anyone can set up a device, then "regarding" might be a better word. |
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When I was younger, it was difficult to find the sun shining in winter. When I was younger, it was difficult to |
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Fortunately, the environmental situation has improved significantly, since many destructive factories have been moved to the rural areas or far away from the city. Fortunately, the environmental situation has improved significantly Fortunately, the environmental situation has improved significantly, since many destructive factories have been moved to the rural areas or far away from the cit |
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As a result, people in my city can enjoy more sunny days than before. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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