Nov. 30, 2022
Winnie-the-Pooh Exhibition
I went to Winnie-the-Pooh exhibition at the Nagoya City Museum of Art in saturday.
The book's illustrations by E.H. Shepard, with around 100 of his original drawings to be displayed.
Pooh, Christopher Robin, Piglet, they were very cute.
The lines of the original drawing were very sharp and had a different quality from the print.
I wish I could draw pretty pictures like those.
土曜日にクマのプーさん展に行ってきました。
E.H. Shepardによるイラスト原画が100点ほど展示されていました。
プーさんや、クリストファー・ロビン、ブタさんたちがとても可愛かったです。
特に原画は線がシャープで印刷物とは違う良さがありました。
私もこんな風に可愛い絵が描きたいです。
I went to Winnie-the-Pooh exhibition at the Nagoya City Museum of Art in sSaturday.
Dec. 1, 2022
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Winnie-the-Pooh Exhibition
I went to the Winnie- the- Pooh exhibition at the Nagoya City Museum of Art ion sSaturday.
楽しそう！
The book's illustrations by E.H. Shepard, with around 100 of his original drawings to b, were displayed.
Pooh, Christopher Robin, Piglet, they were all very cute.
The lines of the original drawing were very sharp and had a different quality from the print version.
I wish I could draw pretty pictures like those.
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いい話です。上手に書けています。
Dec. 1, 2022
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I went to a Winnie- the- Pooh exhibition at the Nagoya City Museum of Art ion sSaturday.
Cool!
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Pooh, Christopher Robin, and Piglet, they were very cute.
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Amazing work!
Dec. 1, 2022
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Winnie-the-Pooh Exhibition
I went to Winnie-the-Pooh exhibition at the Nagoya City Museum of Art ion sSaturday.
The book's illustrations by E.H. Shepard, with around 100 of his original drawings to bewere being displayed.
Pooh, Christopher Robin, Piglet, they were all very cute.
The lines of the original drawing were very sharp and had a different quality from the print.
I wish I could draw pretty pictures like thoese.
Those = distance
You are referring to them directly after you’ve said them, this is close proximity, thus use these would be more appropriate !
Dec. 1, 2022
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Winnie-the-Pooh Exhibition
I went to a Winnie-the-Pooh exhibition at the Nagoya City Museum of Art ion sSaturday.
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The book's illustrations by E.H. Shepard, with around 100 of his original drawings to b, were displayed.
Pooh, Christopher Robin, and Piglet, they were all very cute.
The lines of the original drawing were very sharp and had a different quality from the print.
I wish I could draw pretty pictures like those.
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It sounds like it was a fun day!
Dec. 1, 2022
Thank you for your corrections.
Yes, it was a fun day :)
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