June 27, 2022
So they lived, praised each other, and didn't offend each other. But then the sparrow thought... "I fly through the forest, walk a lot, and work with my wings all day long. What are they do? The pancake lies on a oven and rests in the morning, and he only starts cooking in the evening. The mouse carries wood and chops its in the morning, then also lies and sleeps on a oven until lunch. But I hunt from morning to night, it is hard. I won't take it anymore". The sparrow was enrage, stomped, flapped his wings and screamed "Tomorrow we will switch our works". The pancake and the mouse looked each over, thought there was nothing to do and agreed with the sparrow. The next day, the pancake went hunting, the mouse went cooking and the sparrow went chopping wood. The pancake rolled on the road and sang: "I am jumping and galloping. I am jumping and galloping. I am an oily side. I was created from a sour cream. I was fried with an oil." He ran, ran and faced with a fox.
- "Where are you running and hurrying?".
- "I am going to hunt".
- "What are you singing?".
The pancake jumped on the place and sang: "I am jumping and galloping. I am jumping and galloping. I am an oily side. I was created from a sour cream."
"You are good singing" - said the fox and came close - "So, you say, did you mix with sour cream?"
The pancake answered: "Yes, I was. I was mixed with sour cream and sugar."
The fox jumped and bit him on the side.
The pancake screamed: "Let me go. I need to go to the forest to get mushrooms. I need to hunt." The fox answered: "No, I will eat you. I will swallow you with sour cream, oil and sugar."
The pancake fought, fought, barely escaped from the fox - left the side in the fox's teeth - ran home! ...
What aredo they do?
The pancake lies on a stoven and rests in the morning, and he only starts cooking in the evening.
An oven is the enclosed space where you might bake bread or a casserole. A stove is the flat surface with burners where you might fry eggs or make pancakes. You can have a single appliance which includes both, but when you are referring to its use in cooking, you'll use the appropriate term for whichever type of cooking you are doing.
The mouse carries wood and chops its in the morning, then also lies and sleeps on an oven until lunch.
I didn't correct "oven" to "stove" this time because I'm not sure of your meaning within the story. Mice don't usually sleep on stoves or in ovens. However, if you do mean oven then it needs to be "an oven" rather than "a oven" because "oven" starts with a vowel. This is a general rule for "a" vs "an".
The sparrow was enraged, stomped, flapped his wings and screamed "Tomorrow we will switch our workjobs".
"Enrage" is a verb. "Enraged" is the adjectival form. "Jobs" is probably the word you want at the end, although you might use "chores" or "routines." You definitely don't want "works". You can use "works" as a verb to describe someone's occupation, i.e. "He works as a baker". You can also use the singular noun "work" to describe someone's performance in their occupation, i.e. "His work in the bakery has been excellent." However, the plural noun "works" has significantly different connotations. It's typically used to describe the major results or accomplishments of someone's efforts over time, i.e. "The works of Pablo Picasso are very important in the art world" or "My name is Ozymandias, king of kings. Look upon my works, ye mighty, and despair."
The next day, the pancake went hunting, the mouse went cooking and the sparrow went chopping wood.
I was created from a sour cream.
"Sour cream" is not a countable noun in English. You can say "sour cream" or "some sour cream" or "a lot of sour cream", but not "a sour cream" or "many sour creams".
He ran, ran and faced withencountered a fox.
- "I am going to hunt".
- "What are you singing?
"You are good at singing" - said the fox and came close - "So, you say, didwere you mix ed with sour cream?
I need to go to the forest to get mushrooms.
I need to hunt."
The fox answered: "No, I will eat you.
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There are some sentences where I didn't offer corrections because I think they must be idioms from the original language that didn't translate well into English and I'm not exactly sure what the intended meaning is. For example, when the pancake sings "I am an oily side", does he mean that he has one side which is oily? Or that he is oily on both sides? Or that he is fried in oil? It doesn't make sense in English, and since this is a magical fable with pancakes who can talk and sing and run around, I can't use logical deduction to figure out exactly what is meant.
That said, the overall story is understandable to an English speaker.
So they lived, praised each other, and didn't offend each other.
But then the sparrow thought... "I fly through the forest, walk a lot, and work with my wings all day long.
What aredo they do?
The pancake lies on an oven and rests in the morning, and he only starts cooking in the evening.
The mouse chops and carries wood and chops its in the morning, and then also lies and sleeps on an oven until lunch.
But I hunt from morning to night, it is hard.
I won't take it anymore".
The sparrow was enraged, stomped, flapped his wings and screamed "Tomorrow we will switch our workroles".
The pancake and the mouse looked at each over, thought there was nothing tohey could do, and agreed with the sparrow.
The next day, the pancake went hunting, the mouse went cooking and the sparrow went to chopping wood.
The pancake rolled on the road and sang: "I am jumping and galloping.
I am jumping and galloping.
I am an oily side.
I was created from a sour cream.
I was fried with an oil."
He ran, ran and faced with and ran and met a fox.
- "Where are you running and hurrying to?
- "I am going to hunting".
- "What are you singing?
The pancake jumped on the place and sang: "I am jumping and galloping.
I am jumping and galloping.
I am an oily side.
I was created from a sour cream.
"You are good at singing" - said the fox and came close - "So, you say, did youyou were mix ed with sour cream?
The pancake answered: "Yes, I was.
I was mixed with sour cream and sugar.
The fox jumped and bit him on the side.
The pancake screamed: "Let me go.
I need to go to the forest to get mushrooms.
I need to hunt."
The fox answered: "No, I will eat you.
I will swallow you with sour cream, oil and sugar.
The pancake fought, and fought, barely escaped froming the fox - —left the side in the fox's teeth -—and ran home!
The character you are trying to use "—" is called an emdash, by the way.
Winged, woolly and oily (part 2)
So they lived, praised each other, and didn't offend each other.
But then the sparrow thought... "I fly through the forest, walk a lot, and work with my wings all day long.
What aredo they do?
The pancake lies on a stoven and rests in the morning, and he only starts cooking in the evening.
The oven is the inside of the stove. The stove is the object. So you lie something on the stove.
The mouse carries wood and chops its in the morning, then also lies down and sleeps on a stoven until lunch.
"lie" needs an object. Example: "I'm lying on the couch" vs "I'm lying down"
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The next day, the pancake went hunting, the mouse went cookinged and the sparrow went choppinged wood.
The pancake rolled odown the road and sang: "I am jumping and galloping.
I am an oily side.
I don't know what you are trying to say so I can't correct it. But it doesn't make sense
I was created from a sour cream.
I was fried with an oil."
He ran, ran and faced withencountered a fox.
- "Where are you running and hurrying to?
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The period is always inside the quote. That is how I learned it in school
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- "What are you singing?
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The pancake jumped on thein place and sang: "I am jumping and galloping.
I am jumping and galloping.
I am an oily side.
I don't know what this means.
I was created from a sour cream.
"You are good at singing" - said the fox and came close - "So, you say, did you mix ed with sour cream?
The pancake answered: "Yes, I was.
I was mixed with sour cream and sugar.
The fox jumped and bit him on the side.
The pancake screamed: "Let me go.
I need to go to the forest to get mushrooms.
I need to hunt."
The fox answered: "No, I will eat you.
I will swallow you with sour cream, oil and sugar.
The pancake fought, fought, and barely escaped from the fox - left theit's side in the fox's teeth - and ran home!
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Interesting! I definitely am not as imaginative as you.
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