Winged, wololy and oily.

I've never heard the word "wolly" before. Did you mean wooly as in wooly mammoth?

OnAt the edge of the forest in a warm house residlived three guys - a winged sparrow, a wololy mouse, and an oily pancake.

I changed "resided" to "lived" because "lived" sounds more casual.

The sparrow flew in from a field, the mouse ran away from a cat, and the pancake ran away from a pan.

Everyone did their job and helped the others.

The sparrow brought a food - corn from a field, mushrooms from a forest, and beans from a garden.

The mouse chopped woods and the pancake cooked soup and porridge.

In general, they lived goodwell.

Technically you should use "well" instead of "good" here, but naturally some people use "good" anyways.

The sparrow often returned from athe forest, washed himself with water, and sat on the bench to rest.

At that time, the mouse carried woods, set the table, and counted painted spoons.

Wood - plural
A piece of wood - singular

Also, I've been adding the oxford comma to your lists, but it doesn't absolutely have to be there. Just a preference thing.

And the pancake was beside the bakeoven - blush and lush - was cooking soup and. They saltsed it with coarse salt, and tastesd the porridge.

They sat at the table and praised each others.

I jump in the pot and jump back sout, so the soup is oily."

The sparrow eate the porridge and praised it: "This is the best porridge I have ever eaten.

I changed the verbs to the past-tense since that is what you used before.

The mouse answersed: "I carried woods, crumbled it, and threw in the bakeoven.

Then I swang my tail so the fire burned better so that the porridge became is the best".

The sparrow said: "I am not bad tooeither.

So they lived, praised each other, and didn't offend themselveseach other.

But then the sparrow thinkought...

Winged, wolly and oily.

Did you mean woolly, as in covered in wool? From your next sentence, it looks like the mouse is the woolly one. Wool specifically applies to sheep, so for a mouse, I would say ‘furry mouse’.

On the edge of the forest in a warm house resided three guys - a winged sparrow, a woolly mouse and an oily pancake.

The sparrow flew in from a field, the mouse ran away from a cat, and the pancake ran away from a pan.

They got along with each otherell and didт'n’t offend each other.

Your original sentence is correct, but this one just sounds better because you’re not repeating ‘each other’.

The sparrow brought a food - corn from a field, mushrooms from a forest, and beans from a garden.

Food is plural in this case, so you can say ‘brought some food’ or just ‘brought food’.

In general, they lived a good. life.

Good is an adjective, so if you say ‘a good life’, it’s correct because good describes life.

In your original sentence, ‘good’ was used as an adverb, which is incorrect. The adverb version of ‘good’ is ‘well’, as in ‘They lived well’.

The sparrow often returned from athe forest, washed himself with water and sat on the bench to rest.

At that time the mouse carried woods, set the table and counted painted spoons.

Wood, like pieces of wood, is plural. When you say woods, what that means is a small forest, i.e. many trees.

And the pancake was beside the bakeoven - blush and lush - was cooking soup and, saltsing it with coarse salt, tastesand tasting the porridge.

This is a more complicated sentence.

1. I took out an extra ‘was’. Remember, the sentence should make sense even when you read it without the clause you put between dashes.
2. In the second half, with the list of actions, make sure all the verbs match in tense. In this case, I matched them all to -ing.

They sat at the table and praised each others.

It is king foodfood fit for a king."

I jump in the pot and jump back sout so the soup is oily."

The sparrow eate porridge and praised it: "This is the best porridge I have ever eaten.

I changed your verbs to past tense because your story so far was written in past tense.

It is hot and crumbly."

Porridge is usually not crumbly for me lol but the sentence is correct

The mouse answers: "I carried woods, crumbled it and threw in the bakeoven.

I am assuming you mean oven when you say bake. Sorry if that’s wrong!

An oven is a device for baking.
To bake is a verb.

Then I swaung my tail so the fire burned better so the porridge became is the best". it could be.”

Swing (present tense), swung (past)

In general, it’s safe to put punctuation marks inside quotations, especially for dialogue.

The sparrow said: "I am not bad too.either.

But then the sparrow thinkought...

past tense here too