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yone

March 25, 2025

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Windy

I wake up midnight because it was very windy outside. I was surprised so that weather forecast didn't like that. I heart the sound of rustling wind. The wind settled down this morning. It was sunny day.

Corrections

I waoke up at midnight because it was very windy outside.

“Wake up” should be in past tense.

I was surprised sobecause thate weather forecast didn't’t say it would be like that.

Instead of “so that,” use “because” to explain the reason for your surprise.

I heartd the sound of the rustling wind.

The past tense of “hear” is “heard.” Adding “the” before “rustling wind” makes the sentence sound more natural and complete.

The wind settled down this morning.

This sentence is grammatically correct, natural, and clear. Great job!

Ii waoke up at midnight because it was very windy outside.

Ii was surprised so that weather forecast didn't like that.as it was not on the weather forecast

I heart the sound of rustling wind.

The wind settled down this morning.

It was sunny day.

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great overall. the last few sentences need to connect more to each other

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Pegasus22

March 26, 2025

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excellent

yone's avatar
yone

March 26, 2025

1

Thank you very much for your new expression.

Windy

I waoke up at midnight because it was very windy outside.

Woke, because it’s in the past

I was surprised aso thate weather forecast didn't likepredict that.

I heartlove the sound of rustling wind.

The wind settled down this morning.

It was a sunny day.

Also ‘Today was sunny’ works too

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Excellent - this is really good

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yone

March 26, 2025

1

Thank you so much. I am so happy.

I wake up midnight because it was very windy outside.


I waoke up at midnight because it was very windy outside.

Woke, because it’s in the past

Ii waoke up at midnight because it was very windy outside.

I waoke up at midnight because it was very windy outside.

“Wake up” should be in past tense.

I was surprised so that weather forecast didn't like that.


I was surprised aso thate weather forecast didn't likepredict that.

Ii was surprised so that weather forecast didn't like that.as it was not on the weather forecast

I was surprised sobecause thate weather forecast didn't’t say it would be like that.

Instead of “so that,” use “because” to explain the reason for your surprise.

I heart the sound of rustling wind.


I heartlove the sound of rustling wind.

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I heartd the sound of the rustling wind.

The past tense of “hear” is “heard.” Adding “the” before “rustling wind” makes the sentence sound more natural and complete.

The wind settled down this morning.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The wind settled down this morning.

This sentence is grammatically correct, natural, and clear. Great job!

It was sunny day.


It was a sunny day.

Also ‘Today was sunny’ works too

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Windy


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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