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Edgut93

Sept. 23, 2021

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Will Smith

I just realized that actors whose movies were part of my childhood are getting old. It sounds obvious considering that I'm already 28 and my childhood is way behind me.
But I want to point out that there are cases that I find truly interesting
For example I was surprised when I read the news of Will Smith turning 51. I was really surprised since I've always imagined Will Smith being someone lively, happy and youthful. I used to watch The Fresh Prince of Bel Air , Men in Black and Bad Boys as a kid , that's why whenever I heard the name Will Smith, the image of him being lively, playful, trustworthy, reliable, self confident and strong always came to my mind. It's hard to believe that he is already in his 50s. I'm aware that he is still a good actor, my point is that it's hard for me to imagine one of my childhood heroes being a middle aged man who is almost as old as my father.

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I just realized that actors whose movies were part of my childhood are getting old.

It sounds obvious considering that I'm already 28 and my childhood is way behind me.

I was really surprised since I've always imagined Will Smith beingas someone whose lively, happy and youthful.

I used to watch The Fresh Prince of Bel Air , Men in Black and Bad Boys as a kid , and that's why whenever I heard the name Will Smith, the image of him being lively, playful, trustworthy, reliable, self confident and strong always came to my mind.

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nplearnsspanish

Sept. 24, 2021

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I was really surprised since I've always imagined Will Smith beingas someone whose lively, happy and youthful.

It should be "who's" instead of "whose" because it is a contraction for "who is" rather than showing possession.

Will Smith


I just realized that actors whose movies were part of my childhood are getting old.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It sounds obvious considering that I'm already 28 and my childhood is way behind me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But I want to point out that there are cases that I find truly interesting


For example I was surprised when I read the news of Will Smith turning 51.


I was really surprised since I've always imagined Will Smith being someone lively, happy and youthful.


I was really surprised since I've always imagined Will Smith beingas someone whose lively, happy and youthful.

I used to watch The Fresh Prince of Bel Air , Men in Black and Bad Boys as a kid , that's why whenever I heard the name Will Smith, the image of him being lively, playful, trustworthy, reliable, self confident and strong always came to my mind.


I used to watch The Fresh Prince of Bel Air , Men in Black and Bad Boys as a kid , and that's why whenever I heard the name Will Smith, the image of him being lively, playful, trustworthy, reliable, self confident and strong always came to my mind.

It's hard to believe that he is already in his 50s.


I'm aware that he is still a good actor, my point is that it's hard for me to imagine one of my childhood heroes being a middle aged man who is almost as old as my father.


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