Sept. 23, 2021
Will Smith
I just realized that actors whose movies were part of my childhood are getting old. It sounds obvious considering that I'm already 28 and my childhood is way behind me.
But I want to point out that there are cases that I find truly interesting
For example I was surprised when I read the news of Will Smith turning 51. I was really surprised since I've always imagined Will Smith being someone lively, happy and youthful. I used to watch The Fresh Prince of Bel Air , Men in Black and Bad Boys as a kid , that's why whenever I heard the name Will Smith, the image of him being lively, playful, trustworthy, reliable, self confident and strong always came to my mind. It's hard to believe that he is already in his 50s. I'm aware that he is still a good actor, my point is that it's hard for me to imagine one of my childhood heroes being a middle aged man who is almost as old as my father.
Will Smith
I just realized that actors whose movies were part of my childhood are getting old.
It sounds obvious considering that I'm already 28 and my childhood is way behind me.
But I want to point out that there are cases that I find truly interesting.
For example I was surprised when I read the news of Will Smith turning 51.
I was really surprised since I've always imagined Will Smith being someone lively, happy and youthful.
I used to watch The Fresh Prince of Bel Air , Men in Black and Bad Boys as a kid , t. That's why whenever I heard the name Will Smith, the image of him being lively, playful, trustworthy, reliable, self -confident and strong always came to my mind.
It's hard to believe that he is already in his 50s.
I'm aware that he is still a good actor,; my point is that it's hard for me to imagine one of my childhood heroes being a middle aged man who is almost as old as my father.
You could use a period ( . ) or a semi-colon ( ; ) after "actor".
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I just realized that actors whose movies were part of my childhood are getting old. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It sounds obvious considering that I'm already 28 and my childhood is way behind me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But I want to point out that there are cases that I find truly interesting But I want to point out that there are cases that I find truly interesting. |
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For example I was surprised when I read the news of Will Smith turning 51. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was really surprised since I've always imagined Will Smith being someone lively, happy and youthful. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I used to watch The Fresh Prince of Bel Air , Men in Black and Bad Boys as a kid , that's why whenever I heard the name Will Smith, the image of him being lively, playful, trustworthy, reliable, self confident and strong always came to my mind. I used to watch The Fresh Prince of Bel Air |
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It's hard to believe that he is already in his 50s. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm aware that he is still a good actor, my point is that it's hard for me to imagine one of my childhood heroes being a middle aged man who is almost as old as my father. I'm aware that he is still a good actor You could use a period ( . ) or a semi-colon ( ; ) after "actor". |
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