hebereke's avatar
hebereke

Nov. 5, 2021

0
Will Japan's lack of natural resources become a serious prob

Will Japan's lack of natural resources become a serious problem in the future?

I think Japan's lack of natural resources do not become a serious problem in the future. That is because of the acceleration of globalization, the changes in energy source.
First, today's world is getting globalized every year. Despite the rise of the nationalism in developed counties, the trend will not change in the long run. In such a connected world, countries which hold resources cannot easily stop exporting resources, and as a democratic country, Japan seems to have a good relationships with those countries.
Second, considering the climate change, the energy sources are changing dramatically from fossil fuel to renewable energy. Renewable energy needs not just resources but also technologies. Then, the natural resources will be relatively less important.
For the reasons above, Japan's poor natural resources will not a serious problem.

Corrections

Will Japan's lack of natural resources become a serious problem in the future?

I think Japan's lack of natural resources dowill not become a serious problem in the future.

That is because of the acceleration of globalization, the and changes in energy sourcesources of energy.

"Energy source" isn't wrong. Sources of energy sounds a bit more natural.

First, today's world is gettingbecoming more globalized every year.

Despite the rise of the nationalism in developed counties, the trend will not change in the long run.

You didn't need "the."

In such a connected world, countries which hold resources cannot easily stop exporting resources, and as a democratic country, Japan seems to have a good relationships with those countries.

You didn't need "a" before good relationships.

Second, considering the climate change, the energy sourcessources of energy are changing dramatically from fossil fuel to renewable energy.

For the reasons above, Japan's poor natural resources will not become a serious problem.

Feedback

Well done! I've heard about Japan's issues with natural resources. But as innovative and resourceful as Japan is, I hardly think there's reason to worry too much. And as you said, Japan has strong bonds with countries around the world. But there's no harm on improving on a potential problem.

Will Japan's lack of natural resources become a serious prob


Will Japan's lack of natural resources become a serious problem in the future?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think Japan's lack of natural resources do not become a serious problem in the future.


I think Japan's lack of natural resources dowill not become a serious problem in the future.

That is because of the acceleration of globalization, the changes in energy source.


That is because of the acceleration of globalization, the and changes in energy sourcesources of energy.

"Energy source" isn't wrong. Sources of energy sounds a bit more natural.

First, today's world is getting globalized every year.


First, today's world is gettingbecoming more globalized every year.

Despite the rise of the nationalism in developed counties, the trend will not change in the long run.


Despite the rise of the nationalism in developed counties, the trend will not change in the long run.

You didn't need "the."

In such a connected world, countries which hold resources cannot easily stop exporting resources, and as a democratic country, Japan seems to have a good relationships with those countries.


In such a connected world, countries which hold resources cannot easily stop exporting resources, and as a democratic country, Japan seems to have a good relationships with those countries.

You didn't need "a" before good relationships.

Second, considering the climate change, the energy sources are changing dramatically from fossil fuel to renewable energy.


Second, considering the climate change, the energy sourcessources of energy are changing dramatically from fossil fuel to renewable energy.

Renewable energy needs not just resources but also technologies.


Then, the natural resources will be relatively less important.


For the reasons above, Japan's poor natural resources will not a serious problem.


For the reasons above, Japan's poor natural resources will not become a serious problem.

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium