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kiwy

Oct. 22, 2021

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Wild Animals

Sometimes, some of boy students ask me some personal questions in class like we are friends. They would never realise that we are having class, what they did would disturb the class.
I feel like they are wild animals who want to close to me while I expect them as human beings who are polite at least. Furthermore, I am so impatient to them that I always act like a wild animal trainer, thus, we hurt each other from time to time.

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Wild Animals

Sometimes, some of boy students ask me some personal questions in class like, as if we are friends.

They would never realise that we are having class, and what they did wouldo disturbs the class.

It feels like they are wild animals who want to get close to me while I expect them asto be human beings who are polite, at least.

Furthermore, I am so impatient towith them that I always have to act like a wild animal trainer, t. Thus, we hurt each other from time to time.

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Wild Animals


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Sometimes, some of boy students ask me some personal questions in class like we are friends.


Sometimes, some of boy students ask me some personal questions in class like, as if we are friends.

They would never realise that we are having class, what they did would disturb the class.


They would never realise that we are having class, and what they did wouldo disturbs the class.

I feel like they are wild animals who want to close to me while I expect them as human beings who are polite at least.


It feels like they are wild animals who want to get close to me while I expect them asto be human beings who are polite, at least.

Furthermore, I am so impatient to them that I always act like a wild animal trainer, thus, we hurt each other from time to time.


Furthermore, I am so impatient towith them that I always have to act like a wild animal trainer, t. Thus, we hurt each other from time to time.

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