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I believe what you said because people will become more sensible when they have gone through hardships. They will become smarter and recheck the perspective they had before. As you said, they will become patient, obedience and selflessness. In the face of misfortune, you don't complain about others, but face it with a positive attitude and discover useful things from suffering. This attitude is worth learning for everyone.
I didn't expect your salary to be so high. For me, I have worked for 37 years and my file salary now is 7500 RMB or so a month. Excluding the deduction, the monthly salary is only nearly 5000 RMB. Don't forget that it's now. If it were in 2014, my salary would be even lower. Therefore, the United States deserves to be the greatest country in the world.
I think I used to be a poor person because of my low salary. To change this awful situation, I started a small business and that changed my life. Although I stopped doing it now for some reason, I think I already have enough things for my life. So I think we both fought for our lives.
Yes, when I ran a small business, I worked as hard as you did in your company. We worked hard to make money and we were always very happy when we got the money. We thought money was almost everything at that time, but now we don't.
Cycling is very enjoyable. Every morning at about 6 o'clock, I ride my bicycle to that beautiful park and ride around the park for nearly one hour, then I have breakfast and go to work. In short, as long as there is not a necessary case, I never drive my car. I always cycle: go to work, return home and so on.
It is very nice to meet you on this app and every response from you always brings me joy and happiness. Let's stay healthy and safe because I want to talk with you for the long run.

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This attitude is worth learning for everyone.

I didn't expect your salary to be so high.

For me, I have worked for 37 years and my file salary now is 7500 RMB or so a month.

Don't forget that it's now.

If it were in 2014, my salary would be even lower.

Therefore, the United States deserves to be the greatest country in the world.

I think I used to be a poor person because of my low salary.

Although I stopped doing it now for some reason, I think I already have enough things for my life.

So I think we both fought for our lives.

Yes, when I ran a small business, I worked as hard as you did in your company.

We thought money was almost everything at that time, but now we don't.

Cycling is very enjoyable.

I always cycle: go to work, return home and so on.

Let's stay healthy and safe because I want to talk with you for the long run.

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June 26, 2021

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I believe what you said because people will become more sensible when they have gone through hardships.

Sensible = prudent, cautious - not sure if this is what you mean?

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June 26, 2021

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Excluding the deduction, the monthly salary is only nearly 5000 RMB.

Tax deduction? If so, you could say, "My monthly salary comes out to just 5000 RMB after taxes."

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I believe what you said because people will become more sensible when they have gone through hardships.


I believe what you said because people will become more sensible when they have gone through hardships. I believe what you said because people will become more sensible when they have gone through hardships.

Sensible = prudent, cautious - not sure if this is what you mean?

They will become smarter and recheck the perspective they had before.


They will become smarter and recheck theform new perspective they had befores. They will become smarter and form new perspectives.

As you said, they will become patient, obedience and selflessness.


As you said, they will become patient, obediencet and selflessness. As you said, they will become patient, obedient and selfless.

Selfless = adjective Selflessness = noun Obedient = adj Obedience = noun

In the face of misfortune, you don't complain about others, but face it with a positive attitude and discover useful things from suffering.


In the face of misfortune, you don't complain about others, but face it with a positive attitude and discover useful things from suffering. In the face of misfortune, you don't complain about others but face it with a positive attitude and discover useful things from suffering.

This attitude is worth learning for everyone.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I didn't expect your salary to be so high.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For me, I have worked for 37 years and my file salary now is 7500 RMB or so a month.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Excluding the deduction, the monthly salary is only nearly 5000 RMB.


Excluding the deduction, the monthly salary is only nearly 5000 RMB. Excluding the deduction, the monthly salary is only 5000 RMB.

Tax deduction? If so, you could say, "My monthly salary comes out to just 5000 RMB after taxes."

Don't forget that it's now.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If it were in 2014, my salary would be even lower.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Therefore, the United States deserves to be the greatest country in the world.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think I used to be a poor person because of my low salary.


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To change this awful situation, I started a small business and that changed my life.


To change this awful situation, I started a small business, and that changed my life. To change this awful situation, I started a small business, and that changed my life.

Although I stopped doing it now for some reason, I think I already have enough things for my life.


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So I think we both fought for our lives.


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Yes, when I ran a small business, I worked as hard as you did in your company.


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We worked hard to make money and we were always very happy when we got the money.


We worked hard to make money, and we were always very happy when we got the money. We worked hard to make money, and we were always very happy when we got the money.

Synonyms for "very happy:" delighted, thrilled, pleased. Your English is getting really good, so I think you're at the level where you can add synonyms to your vocabulary :)

We thought money was almost everything at that time, but now we don't.


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Cycling is very enjoyable.


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Every morning at about 6 o'clock, I ride my bicycle to that beautiful park and ride around the park for nearly one hour, then I have breakfast and go to work.


Every morning at about 6 o'clock, I ride my bicycle to that beautiful park and ride around the park for nearly one hour, t. Then I have breakfast and go to work. Every morning at about 6 o'clock, I ride my bicycle to that beautiful park and ride around the park for nearly one hour. Then I have breakfast and go to work.

In short, as long as there is not a necessary case, I never drive my car.


In short, as long as there is not a necessary case, I never drive my car never drive my car unless it's absolutely necessary. I never drive my car unless it's absolutely necessary.

I always cycle: go to work, return home and so on.


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It is very nice to meet you on this app and every response from you always brings me joy and happiness.


It is very nice to meet you on this app, and every response from you always brings me joy and happiness. It is very nice to meet you on this app, and every response from you always brings me joy and happiness.

Let's stay healthy and safe because I want to talk with you for the long run.


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