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kiwy

Sept. 24, 2021

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Friday

I cut a red rose from my little platform garden and sent it to the new headmaster. There are only 9 female stuff in the school, so I decided to send all of them rose if my rose grew well enough. I think most of them have never gotten roses.
I printed my file and sent it to the institution. I hoped I would get reply soon and pass the coming interview.
I am quite happy today. Because I will leave here sooner or later. I am more like an observer than a teacher. A teached regconised the girl in the footage who was smoking adroitly. Her name is Die, who is in Class 4. I am their English teacher, but I can't regconise her. So it means that she behave very normally in class. I observed her in class, she was quiet. Compared the smoking girl with the quiet girl, it was so interesting. I was deeply respect her acting. I will keep my eyes on her more, because I want to know how she is going.
During the class break, I was copying the PPT. Suddenly, a stange girl came to me and told me that someone were fighting. I went out at once, and saw there were standing many students like a circle. Two boys were hitting a boy who is in Class 4. I tried to stop them but them were fighting severely. It was quite horrible that I was afraid that they wouldn't regconise me as a teacher and hit me as well. I waited and when they separated a little, I pushed the boy away and asked them to stop. When I was back to classroom, I was told that they fighted again. There was another boy hitting the same boy. I had to stop them. A boy stood next to spoke: the teacher was here, to reslect her, don't fight here. Then they went downstairs. I told the teacher of Class 4 immediately. He said that it was a good fight, because he also wanted to hit the boy. Well, the boy is quite naughty in class. It seems that he will be hit early or late.

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Friday

I cut a red rose from my little platform garden and sent it to the new headmaster.

I hoped I would get reply soon and pass the coming interview.

I am quite happy today.

I observed her in class, she was quiet.

During the class break, I was copying the PPT.

There was another boy hitting the same boy.

I had to stop them.

I told the teacher of Class 4 immediately.

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kiwy

Sept. 25, 2021

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I printed my filresume and sent it to the institution I was applying to work at.

Based on the next sentence and your discontent with your current job I made some assumptions. Without my corrections it's impossible for the reader to know what the 'file' and 'institution' are.

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sivanc

Sept. 25, 2021

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I am preparing an interview about my education. If I pass, I can apply German school. The interview is aiming at Chinese students. I am so sad.

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kiwy

Sept. 25, 2021

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kiwy

Sept. 25, 2021

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Oh, I see. So it's a program for Chinese students to study in Germany? If so, I would change 'resume' to CV/application and institution to 'program I am trying to get into.'

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sivanc

Sept. 25, 2021

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I need to submit quite a lot files, resume is included.

I cut a red rose from my little platform garden and sent it to the new headmaster.

I think most of them have never gotten roses.

I am quite happy today.

Because I will leave here sooner or later.

I am more like an observer than a teacher.

Her name is Die, who is in Class 4.

I observed her in class, she was quiet.

I will keep my eyes on her more, because I want to know how she is going.

During the class break, I was copying the PPT.

Two boys were hitting a boy who is in Class 4.

I waited and when they separated a little, I pushed the boy away and asked them to stop.

There was another boy hitting the same boy.

I had to stop them.

Then they went downstairs.

I told the teacher of Class 4 immediately.

He said that it was a good fight, because he also wanted to hit the boy.

Well, the boy is quite naughty in class.

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kiwy

Sept. 25, 2021

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Well, the boy is quite naughty in class.


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WellTo be fair, the boy ishas been quite naughty in class. To be fair, the boy has been quite naughty in class.

It seems that he will be hit early or late.


It seems that he will be hit earlysooner or later. It seems that he will be hit sooner or later.

It seemsed inevitable that he willould be hit earlysooner or later. It seemed inevitable that he would be hit sooner or later.

Friday


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I cut a red rose from my little platform garden and sent it to the new headmaster.


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There are only 9 female stuff in the school, so I decided to send all of them rose if my rose grew well enough.


There are only 9 female stuaff in the school, so I decided to send alleach of them a rose if my roses grew well enough. There are only 9 female staff in the school, so I decided to send each of them a rose if my roses grew well enough.

There are only 9 female stuaff inat the school, so I decided to send all of them roses, if my rosine grew well enough. There are only 9 female staff at the school, so I decided to send all of them roses, if mine grew well enough.

I think most of them have never gotten roses.


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I think that most of them have never gottbeen sent roses before. I think that most of them have never been sent roses before.

'Gotten' feels more like 取得 here.

I printed my file and sent it to the institution.


I printed my filresume and sent it to the institution I was applying to work at. I printed my resume and sent it to the institution I was applying to work at.

Based on the next sentence and your discontent with your current job I made some assumptions. Without my corrections it's impossible for the reader to know what the 'file' and 'institution' are.

I hoped I would get reply soon and pass the coming interview.


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I hoped I wouldill get reply soon and pass the coming interview. I hope I will get reply soon and pass the coming interview.

I am quite happy today.


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Because I will leave here sooner or later.


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Because I will leave here sooner or later. Because I will leave here sooner or later.

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I am more like an observer than a teacher.


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I am more like an observer than a teacher here. I am more like an observer than a teacher here.

A teached regconised the girl in the footage who was smoking adroitly.


A teachedr regcognised the girl in the footage who was smoking adroitly. A teacher recognised the girl in the footage who was smoking adroitly.

A teachedr regcognised the girl in the footage who was smoking adroidiscreetly. A teacher recognised the girl in the footage who was smoking discreetly.

Maybe consider 'skillfully' if that's closer to what you meant. Either way, 'adroitly' is too fancy.

Her name is Die, who is in Class 4.


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Her name is Die, whoand she is in Class 4. Her name is Die, and she is in Class 4.

I am their English teacher, but I can't regconise her.


I am their English teacher, but I can't regcognise her. I am her English teacher, but I can't recognise her.

I am their English teacher, but I cadidn't regcognise therm. I am their English teacher, but I didn't recognise them.

Might have misinterpreted here.

So it means that she behave very normally in class.


So it means that she behaves very normally in class. So it means that she behaves very normally in class.

So it means that she behaves very normally in class. She behaves very normally in class.

I observed her in class, she was quiet.


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Compared the smoking girl with the quiet girl, it was so interesting.


CIt was so interesting to compared the smoking girl with the quiet girl, it was so interesting. It was so interesting to compare the smoking girl with the quiet girl.

Compared the smoking girl wiI would never have thought the the quiet girl, it was so interestingn class and the girl smoking in the classroom at night were one and the same. I would never have thought the the quiet girl in class and the girl smoking in the classroom at night were one and the same.

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I was deeply respect her acting.


I was deeply respect her acting. I deeply respect her acting.

I was deeply respect her acting skills. I deeply respect her acting skills.

I will keep my eyes on her more, because I want to know how she is going.


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I will keep my eyes on her more, because I want to know how she is gdoing. I will keep my eye on her more, because I want to know how she is doing.

During the class break, I was copying the PPT.


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Suddenly, a stange girl came to me and told me that someone were fighting.


Suddenly, a strange girl came to me and told me that someone wereas fighting. Suddenly, a strange girl came to me and told me that someone was fighting.

Suddenly, a stange girlgirl I didn't recognize came to me and told me that someone were fighting. Suddenly, a girl I didn't recognize came to me and told me that someone were fighting.

I assume you meant 陌生 and not 奇怪,. They both translate to 'strange', but only in certain contexts.

I went out at once, and saw there were standing many students like a circle.


I went out at once, and saw there were standing many students likestanding in a circle. I went out at once, and saw many students standing in a circle.

I wentcame out at once, and saw that there were standing many students likestanding in a circle. I came out at once, and saw that there were many students standing in a circle.

Two boys were hitting a boy who is in Class 4.


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Two boys were hitting another boy, who iwas in Class 4. Two boys were hitting another boy, who was in Class 4.

I tried to stop them but them were fighting severely.


I tried to stop them but themy were fighting severely. I tried to stop them but they were fighting severely.

I tried to stop them, but themy were fighting severeferociously. I tried to stop them, but they were fighting ferociously.

It was quite horrible that I was afraid that they wouldn't regconise me as a teacher and hit me as well.


It was quite horrible that I was afraid that they wouldn't regcognise me as a teacher and hit me as well. It was quite horrible that I was afraid that they wouldn't recognise me as a teacher and hit me as well.

It was quite horrible that, and I was afraid that they wouldn't regcognise me as a teacher and would hit me as well. It was quite horrible, and I was afraid that they wouldn't recognise me as a teacher and would hit me as well.

The 'would' is important because otherwise is sounds like they wouldn't recognize you and wouldn't hit you.

I waited and when they separated a little, I pushed the boy away and asked them to stop.


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I waited, and, when they separated a little, I pushed one of the boys away and asketold them to stop. I waited, and, when they separated a little, I pushed one of the boys away and told them to stop.

When I was back to classroom, I was told that they fighted again.


When I was back toin the classroom, I was told that they fioughted again. When I was back in the classroom, I was told that they fought again.

When I wascame back tointo the classroom, I was told that they were fighteding again. When I came back into the classroom, I was told that they were fighting again.

There was another boy hitting the same boy.


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I had to stop them.


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A boy stood next to spoke: the teacher was here, to reslect her, don't fight here.


A boy stood next to spoke: the teacher was here, to reslect her, don't fight here. A boy stood next to spoke: the teacher was here, to reslect her, don't fight here.

Sorry, I don't know what you mean.

A boy stoodwho was standing next to me spoke:, saying the teacher was here, to reslpect her, don't fight here. A boy who was standing next to me spoke, saying the teacher was here, to respect her, don't fight here.

Technically, "a boy stood next to me spoke" is correct, but in that case it actually is "a boy (who had been made to stand) next to me spoke." Another example: "The umbrellas had been stood up in a row near the door."

Then they went downstairs.


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ThenFinally, they went downstairs. Finally, they went downstairs.

I told the teacher of Class 4 immediately.


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He said that it was a good fight, because he also wanted to hit the boy.


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He said that it was a good fight, becaushe head also wanted to hit the boy. He said that it was a good fight, he had also wanted to hit the boy.

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