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ponta

Jan. 26, 2021

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Wi-Fi

Today, I couldn't use the internet before noon because my Wi-Fi router didn't work. I live in an apartment so I thought it was just a bad connection caused by simultaneous uses. However, after one hour I still couldn't access the internet. Therefore, I found my router had a problem. After all, after I unplugged the router and clean the LAN cable by air duster, the router has worked normally. It was lucky that I didn't have online classes while Wi-Fi was out of order, and I understood Wi-Fi is essential.

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Wi-Fi

Today, I couldn't use the internet before noon because my Wi-Fi router didn't work.

I live in an apartment so I thought it was just a bad connection caused by simultaneous uses.

However, after one hour I still couldn't access the internet.

Therefore, I found my router had a problemIt turns out that my router was causing the issue.

"Therefore" is usually used after a long explanation, so using it after your short explanation sounds unnecessary.

After all, after I unplugged the router and used an air duster to clean the LAN cable by air duster, the router has worked normally.

It was lucky that I didn't have online classes while my Wi-Fi was out of order, and I understood Wi-Fi isnot working. Now I understand how essential Wi-Fi is.

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nocturnalplant

Jan. 26, 2021

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Great job overall!

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ponta

Jan. 27, 2021

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Thank you so much!

Wi-Fi


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Today, I couldn't use the internet before noon because my Wi-Fi router didn't work.


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I live in an apartment so I thought it was just a bad connection caused by simultaneous uses.


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However, after one hour I still couldn't access the internet.


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Therefore, I found my router had a problem.


Therefore, I found my router had a problemIt turns out that my router was causing the issue.

"Therefore" is usually used after a long explanation, so using it after your short explanation sounds unnecessary.

After all, after I unplugged the router and clean the LAN cable by air duster, the router has worked normally.


After all, after I unplugged the router and used an air duster to clean the LAN cable by air duster, the router has worked normally.

It was lucky that I didn't have online classes while Wi-Fi was out of order, and I understood Wi-Fi is essential.


It was lucky that I didn't have online classes while my Wi-Fi was out of order, and I understood Wi-Fi isnot working. Now I understand how essential Wi-Fi is.

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