If you you look all around you, you will see a lot of people feeling anxious.

The causes are countless and various.

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For instance, you can be afraid to buy something that people won't like whereas, meanwhile the only important opinion is yours.

At school, you always want to have the best grade in the class or a bestter grade than your friend.

Even though it doensn't look important, I think it has a real impact overn people.

Another reason, and for me the main reason, is the social media.

With social media, it's easy to get hooked and very difficult to find the pleiasure you had with simple things.

Moreover, when you get hooked, you don't hang out a lot and it, which has bad health consequences.

It looks like nothing, but I promise you it's important.

The build-up of many little things can create a growing stressful and it's the best way to fight against it.

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For example, some people can be stressed because of their exams.

For instance, you can be afraid to buy something that people won't like, whereas the only important opinion is (should be) yours.

I've also observed that there is a competition between people in almost every area of life.

At school, you always want to have the best grade in the class or a bestter grade than your friend.

Even though it doensn't look important, I think it has a real impact overn people.

Another reason, — and for me the main reason, — is the social media.

With social media, it's easy to get hooked and very difficult to find the pleiasure you had with simple things.

For example, reading looks very boring if we compare it with playing video games.

Moreover, when you get hooked, you don't hang out with friends a lot and ithis has bad health consequences.

The build-up of everything I saimentioned has terrible consequences over your health.

You feel less attentive, stressed, less sociable, and sociable, more stressed and many other bad things.

I think thea real solution to fight against stresffuls is to allow yourself to take some breaks.

You can take only 5 minutes and breathe, think about the things in your life that you want to improve.

It's the key to finding peaceful in your of mind.

When something you have to do lasttakes less than 2 minutes, then do it now.

It lookssounds like nothing, but I promise you it's important.

The build-up of many little things can create a growing stressful and it'finishing small tasks is the best way to fight against it.

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