From my perspective iI think is having something to looking forward to is crucial, Such as an achivevement like improving a language or some other skills.

"Look forward" is more natural here because it is something that you are thinking about the future, or looking ahead in this context. "Looking forward" is bit more common for something that is upcoming that you're excited for, such as "I'm looking forward to eat my favorite food tonight!" etc.

the lLooking forward is what madke us want to keep on liveing and breathing as we have a reasonable reason to smile toand wake up everyday to enjoy with the shines of the rising sun spots on our face skin.

I used "keep" because it is what maintains the reason to live and breathe. Just simply using "face" is also enough and a lot more natural!

wWe have a reason to smile, to be better than our the version of our old selves versions every year.

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I'd say "For people with～" is lot more natural structure when referring to what someone has.

The humanity can not live or deny thier living reason beacuse it is thier charging powereir reason to live because it is what motivates them.

In this context, the reason to live is what keeps people going. In definition, we can use "motivate" or motivation, as the charging power.

wWhy the person needs to look forward

- Capital letter at the start of a sentence
- corrected conjugation for 'to need' in first person singular

From my perspective i, I think is having something to looking forward to is crucial, Ssuch as an achivevement like improving a language or some skills.

- Added a comma after perspective because it sounds a bit more natural to take a pause after saying this (think about saying this sentence out loud)
- i is always capitalised when it's by itself
- 'is' is not necessary here, it doesn't make sense
- corrected spelling of something
- no capitalisations after a comma (Such -> such)
- fix spelling for achievement. As an extra remember rule 'i before e expect after c' works for all words English words that I know of
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tThe looking forward part is what madekes us want to liveing and breathing we and have a reasonable reason to smile, to wake up everyday and to enjoy with the shine of the rising sun spots on our face skin.

- Start of a sentence always has a capital
- added word 'part' for clarity of the sentence (not strictly necessary though)
- made -> makes as we are talking in the present tense here
- breathing -> breath as we are talking in the present tense here
- reasonable is not the right word in this context. Getting rid of it works well but if you really want to have a word here something like 'good' would work
- whenever you are listing something in English, the list is always comma separated with 'and' instead of a comma separating the last and second last item in the list
- removed word spots as this sounds a bit unnatural

wWe have a reason to smile to be better than our old selves versions every year.

- capital letter always at the start of sentences
- pick either selves or versions but not both as they both mean the same thing in this context
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tThe common thing between theause of deppression infectins disorderg people is that they have not thing to looking forward tom tomorrow so there is no reason to come out ofrom the bed or do anything because the passion of living is empty in their inner selves. and that,'s why one of ways for a partialtyto recover is to find reason to live, to wake every morning and smile.

- 'The cause of depression infecting people' is I think what you meant to say here. The word 'common' that you used isn't quite right in this context
- not thing -> nothing
- 'out of bed' is more natural than 'out from the bed'
- Fixed some other stuff but was just some grammatical things

The hHumanity can not live or deny thier living reason beacuse it is thier chargingeir reason for living because it is their power.

- You are referring to humanity as a group of people as in Italians or Americans etc so no need to start it with 'the'
- to spell because most English people remember the expression 'Betty Eats Cake And Uncle Sells Eggs'
- Charging power doesn't really make sense, I'm not quite sure what you meant in this case
- thier is spelt their