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June 20, 2022

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Why Spirited Agway’s Soundtrack…

Why the music of this movie is so good?

Is that a question?

Ask 1000 people they will answer the music from this movie was damn good!

No matter how many times you listen.

You want to pay money and buy ticket for live concert.

That is level of answer you will get when you ask me.

But today I watched a video from a musician, he explains how the music was good.

Is like an engineer tells you how to build a skyscraper!

The “good” is not normal people like me can understand.

Even I watched the video I can “understand” 10% how good was that music.

What about you?

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Why Spirited Agways Soundtrack

You can use incomplete sentences for titles in some cases, but the way your title was written, it felt awkward and did not give enough information.

Why the music of this movie isis “Spirited Away”’’s music so good?

Since this is the first sentence of your writing, you should use the actual name of the movie.

Is that even a question?

I feel like adding “even” here adds emphasis that I think you meant to express by using this question.

AIf you ask 1,000 people, they will answer the music from(all) tell you that this movie wa’s music is damn good!

Since the music in the music still exists and still is good, “is” is preferable to “was”.

NIt’s the same no matter how many times you listen to it.

YIt makes you want to pay money and buyfor a ticket for a live concert (of the music).

The part in the parentheses is not completely necessary, but I think its addition makes this sentence feel more complete.

That is the level of answer you willould get whenif you asked me (how good it is).

But tToday, I watched a video fromin which a musician, he explains howwhy the music wais good.

It was like hearing an engineer tells you how to build a skyscraper!

Theat type of “good” is not something normal people like me can understand.

Even though I watched theat video, I can only understand” 10% how good was about 10% of why thate music is good.

What about you?

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I agree; the music in that movie is beautiful. :)

Why Spirited Agway’s Soundtrack…


Why Spirited Agways Soundtrack

You can use incomplete sentences for titles in some cases, but the way your title was written, it felt awkward and did not give enough information.

Why the music of this movie is so good?


Why the music of this movie isis “Spirited Away”’’s music so good?

Since this is the first sentence of your writing, you should use the actual name of the movie.

Is that a question?


Is that even a question?

I feel like adding “even” here adds emphasis that I think you meant to express by using this question.

Ask 1000 people they will answer the music from this movie was damn good!


AIf you ask 1,000 people, they will answer the music from(all) tell you that this movie wa’s music is damn good!

Since the music in the music still exists and still is good, “is” is preferable to “was”.

No matter how many times you listen.


NIt’s the same no matter how many times you listen to it.

You want to pay money and buy ticket for live concert.


YIt makes you want to pay money and buyfor a ticket for a live concert (of the music).

The part in the parentheses is not completely necessary, but I think its addition makes this sentence feel more complete.

That is level of answer you will get when you ask me.


That is the level of answer you willould get whenif you asked me (how good it is).

But today I watched a video from a musician, he explains how the music was good.


But tToday, I watched a video fromin which a musician, he explains howwhy the music wais good.

Is like an engineer tells you how to build a skyscraper!


It was like hearing an engineer tells you how to build a skyscraper!

The “good” is not normal people like me can understand.


Theat type of “good” is not something normal people like me can understand.

Even I watched the video I can “understand” 10% how good was that music.


Even though I watched theat video, I can only understand” 10% how good was about 10% of why thate music is good.

What about you?


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